Reviews for Discovering Lily
frizzyhead chapter 2 . 3/19/2007
you left in the names of some punctuation instead of changing it to actual punctuation marks but apart from that I thought this was very, very well written

can't wait for you to update
Heavenlydoll chapter 2 . 3/18/2007
I REALLY like this story! it is beautifully written! update soon~
Dueler312 chapter 1 . 3/8/2007
This sounds really neat. Keep it up.
Motherlyclucker chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
LOVELYLOVELYLOVELY! I had a tear in my eye, it was so pretty. I want you to update cuz i like seeing Harry be protective!

Sincerely,

Motherlyclucker
lolamadrid chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
Lovely, lovely story! Interesting take and not too mushy. Kind of dreamy, actually, which is very appropriate I suppose.

The only awkward moment for me was the getting the milk part. But the dream was very sad and sweet and touching. I like that it's a bit scary for them, of course it would be, in any circumstance, much less theirs.

Thanks!
random passer-by chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
Wow... I quite like this so far, hope to see chapter 2 up soon!
James-Padfoot chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
Brilliant. Bloody brilliant. Moremoremoremore.
SheRocKZThaTsTaGe chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
This is an amazing story! keep it that way!
Quidditchstar2291 chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
awesome first chapter! i cannot wait to see where the story we go. i can't wait for the next.
charmedunderharry'sspell chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
A nice idea, I look forward to finding out how you expand it
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