Excellent novel. I'm a bit confused how Lupin can touch Peter's silver hand, and why Fenrir Greyback is afraid of iron, but other than those two werewolf tropes being switched, nothing ever slowed me down when I was reading the story. It was exciting, well plotted, and there weren't any plot-holes or out of character conversations or actions. Job well done, author!

Somebody better help Dobby!

exciting chapter

This is a great novel, but a few things are still confusing. For example: the galleon offered printed messages only, but now it transmits pain signals?

I'm glad Hermione's stupidity didn't cause trouble. What kind of moron hides things under her mattress?

OMG, this last bit is the funniest thing I've read in years (ch. 13).

great chapter ending

i absoutely loved it! bloody brillant i say:)

I do hope Snape is still on the good side? I'm loving the story so far though! )

What an amazing story great job!

This was such a great read. Hats off to you.

Brilliant! Thank you so much for such a marvelous and addictive read. I think you redeemed DM quite well, if a bit fast, and I love what happened with Snape and Regulus. Really cool, and a great twist.

Much appreciated, keep up the good work!

May your words flow quickly and your ink run smooth.

:)

Nice story. The ending was a bit chaotic, but it was a battle so I guess that is to be expected. Once I figured out what was happening, it was over. Other than that, I thought it all turned out pretty well.

great story!

Great story. I really liked the RAB twist.