Reviews for Love and Punishment
emmaleexx chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
Haha, that was so amazingly cute! Loved it~~
younggem chapter 1 . 8/31/2007
I love it!

so cute :D

Anise Nalci chapter 1 . 5/22/2007
Adorable. I noticed you added more of Yamazaki and Chiharu into the fic.
chocolate-chipped chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
Loved it.

Sequel, plz?
Adelaide MacGregor chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
Cute. A few transitions were a bit weird. A cute idea.
Mitzuki chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
so kawaii! ;3
Newbie GK chapter 1 . 3/14/2007
Interesting story. Cute beginning.
shortygirl333 chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
So cute! So sweet! I love it! Nice job!
a woman with eyes chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
Hmm... It was slightly dull and slow, but sweet.

I think the only thing is really lacks is more feeling. Just a hint of description, like how the feel of his touch was, how the sun lightly warmed their cheeks, ETC. It honestly doesn't need too much, just enough. It was pretty well-written already.

Overall, I like that sweet, simply touch. It was really light fluffy, but nonetheless, fluffy.

PurpleHime chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
aww... kawaii! i love it! so sweet! it's adorable! great job! you should write more!