Reviews for A Child's Message
rikufanattic chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
You know surprisingly I can see Ienzo as a little bit of being a bully. This is a good one-shot and I'm impressed by it. I didn't find any spelling errors, but then again not everyone is perfect. Very well written though, and the characters were kept well into their personality. Other than that I did find it a bit of a little tear-jerker when she was reading the entries. Still I mean Xehanort would've been a bit older than Ienzo if you think about it, but oh well it's your story, and like you said it's a random little one-shot.
Nobodies Have Hearts chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
Why was Xehnort 7 years old? Why did you make Ienzo a Bully too? He was kind shy and full of knolage when he was young. How dare you make him mean! Otherwise it was great. I just don't see Ienzo being a bully being so weak & small. Sorry for flames but Ienzo's my fav charecter.
pinwheel926 chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
That was so cute! I have a new outlook on Xehanort now. I love the idea's you put into this! Wonderful work!