Reviews for Stray Bullet
Guest chapter 3 . 5/30
i can't buy jiraiya teaching sasuke the rasengan, it's THE rasengan ya' know
Lord-Chrono chapter 3 . 3/21
Started with an interesting idea, a couple points I don't make sense but I'd like to bring up are naruto was taught the rasengan after the third died. A certain character doesn't seem to be brooding or emo. And finally certain characters are trained by others because of their nature affinities or legacy.

I give you props for continuing a story that you created and I'm not trying to bash it, however I cannot keep reading.
Caged777 chapter 14 . 1/8
I love Naru chapter 1 . 3/20/2016
I honestly couldn't make it past where the Rasengan is given to Sasuke I mean it's Narutos legacy to have that and it's not wise to change the anime line this much it can cause an uproar .
If you are reading this and hate the idea of Sasuke having Narutos role , I suggest you find another story
Guest chapter 3 . 3/20/2016
Stopped reading this due to the training swap of Sasuke and Naruto because if Sasuke knows the Rasengan what will become of the entire Naruto as an anime it will never be the way it should be
Guest chapter 1 . 3/9/2016
This is not the story
blacklightning1 chapter 14 . 1/3/2016
please write another chapter soon
coolchick87 chapter 14 . 12/5/2015
I love your story please update it real soon. Thanks
Guest chapter 14 . 11/1/2015
Update bra?!
Guest chapter 3 . 10/7/2015
He would not teach him rasengan its the 4th's technique - Naruto father so I cant see that happeng also from what I can see you are switching Sasuke and Naruto's roles
Kaze no Kieran chapter 5 . 8/17/2015
Why do you keep naming your chapters after Metallica songs? I originally came here for a Naruto - Metallica songfic (grumbles silently about misleading titles).
Guest chapter 14 . 5/20/2015
Pleas say you didnt abandoned this story? :(
Its freaking awesome to not read it?!
I like it, will Naruto stay with Itachi for a long time? I hope so, they're awesome together hehe
Please let us know the status of this story?:3
Guest chapter 3 . 4/23/2015
I'm not trying to bash your work or anything but just me personally I'm all for reading au and all that but to have jairya teach sasuke the rasengan makes no sense he only taught naruto because minato is his dad and its pretty much a family jutsu at least to me is he going to give him the toad contract next please say no that would ruin this story for me if he did
Jessa93 chapter 14 . 2/5/2015
Love the story so far! I hope to see an update! Ja ne!
- much love, Jessa
Gothic Rain chapter 3 . 8/27/2014
I'm surprised He would teach an uchiha a family technique, something he should be teaching Naruto, though I do understand why you've written it this way, I'm simply stating it doesn't make sense.
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