Reviews for Prodigy
Princesscrystalwrite chapter 27 . 1/20/2019
This is the best, I actually read the entire are a magician...
Jimbocous chapter 13 . 12/9/2018
"Did your ankle brake again?"

Gimme a break!
If it's hooked to a vehicle, it's a brake.
If it's not, it's a break!

Sorry, after about a hundred instances so far, I just had to mention it :)
Thanks ...
BrentNewland chapter 10 . 12/1/2018
Were you on drugs when you wrote this chapter? I mean, they have their hamstrings cut, and then their just fine with it after a quick scream? He hops on one leg with a person on each shoulder? Radios and cell phones work in Hogwarts, but the radio is suddenly a CD player able to repeat songs, and yet multiple vehicles get disabled because of ambient magic in a desert? He has a "highly illegal automatic weapon" in his truck despite being Law Enforcement? They portkey out of Death Eater Central, no anti-portkey wards? His ankle is healed by phoenix tears, but he has a limp? His friend appears in the middle of the desert with him - how did he find him? What exactly is this "miniature of a scene" you keep referring to? The bomb has a motion sensor that doesn't detect motion, but instead detects how far away from something it is? He knows this just by glancing at it? Hell, he knows it's a bomb just because there's a blinking light? They arrived in a truck, and show up at an overturned car, how exactly are they going to "carry" a car? Why wouldn't they just apparate away instead of letting themselves be blown up? Don't you think it's a bit too coincidental that they decided the bomb would explode after a minute and it did? One of them gets hit by a truck carrying friends, and they what - left the body there?

I'm sorry, but this chapter is absolutely terrible. It just plain sucks.
spyinsecret007 chapter 1 . 11/5/2018
This just remind me of The Immortals aka worst hp fanfic on ever. Im sorry but this just triggers it. I cannot go on
fireworks700 chapter 27 . 10/31/2018
Hilarious. I love it.
Cinder46231 chapter 27 . 10/28/2018
It's so good I have read it for the fifth time. This is one of my all time favourites!
gregory hanssen chapter 26 . 10/16/2018
Dude you did a great job writing this FF.
seldombites chapter 27 . 9/16/2018
This is a decent story. I enjoyed it.
Guest1980 chapter 17 . 8/16/2018
"Mm-mm, no."

-original Andron quote

Gee, that just about summarizes my life for me...
BasiliskSlayer7 chapter 13 . 7/31/2018
The fact you intertwined Psych in this story, makes me so happy. Psych is such a great show, hoping theres more scenes with Gus included
Robert C. Lewis chapter 17 . 7/18/2018
This is good, but you really need some clear dividers to signal a switch between perspectives and places. I read one senetence, go down a line, read a sentence or two and realize i've jumped the Atlantic just in time to jump it again.
19Shorty chapter 27 . 7/17/2018
What a wonderful story you created and it was a great ending and by the way i noticed u said that you started this story when u were a freshmen and completed in your senior year of 2010 i was wondering what school u went to and what city it was in
NatashaJaniphil chapter 27 . 7/1/2018
God, this was awesome. Your plot is mindblowing, I swear. I loved how you depicted Harry in this, and the fact that everything was so believable except for Harry dying like a million times.
TechnoGalen chapter 1 . 6/29/2018
More forgiveness s**t.
PHEONIX39 chapter 19 . 6/29/2018
While I enjoyed the rant about the cost of movies etc,. Anther possible way around that was to go and work in a movie theater. I did for a while and saw whatever I wanted and when I was working with the projectors I could go in early and watch with family and friends. Then afterwards I said my goodbyes to everyone and went to work.
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