Reviews for Desperate Desires
Sillybookwarm chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
A lot of contradictions with facts in the HP series like: if there were a spell that could see through the invisibility cloak, then why is it so precious? And I thought ppl could only see their own desires in the mirror, even if they are standing next to someone else. Love your style of writing though. :D
loretta537 chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
this is so sad
Sylvia12 chapter 1 . 11/27/2008
It was good... but I thought no one else was able to see the beholders most ardent wish? Or is Dumbledore much more powerful than we thought...? *wiggles eyebrows mysteriously*. Anyway, great writing!
aelurus chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
This is gorgeously heart-breaking. A pleasure to read.
Donald Masters chapter 1 . 3/15/2007
Woot. Good job. Congratulations!
DeathlyPhoenix chapter 1 . 3/5/2007
not. going. to. cry. not. going. to. cry.

that was so good. amazing.
shannyauburn chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
Great job!
legalien chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
Nice! I really love the last three paragraphs. You really are a master at getting into character as Dumbledore!
WanderingAnariel chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
Very sweet and touching story. And of course it's well written. Envious much? maybe just a bit. Love ya girlie!