Reviews for Love is Gold
Guest chapter 9 . 1/18/2014
Its a decent story, but I found a plot hole. Opal said: Not until your mine. Until his mine what?
Guest chapter 8 . 1/18/2014
I might be wrong, but I think that artemis know fighting skills from Orion.
Tawny chapter 10 . 12/13/2012
Dude acted like a moron. What can I say?
Guest chapter 5 . 8/26/2012
O u just love cliff hangers huh?!
RoseRedMisery chapter 11 . 8/24/2009
you know i've been wanting to find a fic with opal crushing on arty, in like a psycho kinda way. good job
RoseRedMisery chapter 10 . 8/24/2009
“I never thought that they would be so big and…skilled. Did you?”

“I’ve done worse.”

That's what she said! LOL you did that on purpose didnt you?
Aquamarinelightnight chapter 11 . 4/8/2009
yay! im glad u made it A/H
Aquamarinelightnight chapter 10 . 4/8/2009
check your spelling
Aquamarinelightnight chapter 4 . 4/7/2009
how could u kill kelp
Ariadnaaa chapter 11 . 7/4/2008
Hi!

I love your story! )

kisses
x.BadWolfRose.x chapter 11 . 8/1/2007
great story. It's the artemis/holly story everyone always wanted.

At the risk of sounding like an annoying english teacher, i feel that i need to mention you need to watch spelling and grammar. Seriously, it would improve the story an enourmous amount if people didn't keep reading 'sure' spelt 'shore'. I'm actually an appalling speller myself so the trick is to type it all up in a word document first, then you can use spell check :)

Also, check your tenses. the story often slips from the present tense, into the past, then back into the present all in one sentence. gets kind of confusing :p

otherwise a fantastic story. keep writing more. :D
Haruka and Hikari chapter 11 . 7/18/2007
.it. oh...and by the way...what do you mean Opal left for good?
spiralANgel chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
YEAH! i like that idea, man why couldnt it have happened well anyways great story i really liked it plaz keep writing more i cant wait to read your other stories
Lisi the slayer chapter 1 . 5/14/2007
Hi !

first off congrats on a gr8 fanfic, I myself am a major Artemis/Holly shipper

the only thing is I was left unsatitsified by the ending, there is so much more your story could expand on, for instantance in your summery you said Artemis reveals his true feelings he never did ? there's definitly enough for a squel please right one ! how will Artemis' and holly's relationship progress from here ?

Lisi the slayer
paradisegurl101 chapter 11 . 5/13/2007
Aww! The perfectly perfect ending! I love it so much!

I also really like how Opal reacted: 'Opal Koboi looked back once more and whispered into the night air ‘Goodbye Artemis’ and left to leave forever.'

And the ending was awesomely awesome! (I already said that. Perfectly awesomely awesome) ]

Excellent job on this story! ]
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