Reviews for A New Start
Saissa chapter 21 . 6/26
The story line and plot are good. The whole thing is much too rushed.
Could do with tons more detail. The chapters are way too short.
The vocabulary used in this story makes it seem like it was written by a child.
Queen Sound chapter 21 . 12/6/2014
Great story
Starlight chapter 10 . 8/31/2014
I know writing fanfics are not pieces of cakes but ur fanfic is really rushed, u get what I mean? A stranger comes and asks u,"u wanna live with me?" You can't just say,"yeah, I'll get my things." But keep on trying
Danny For Jesus chapter 21 . 8/22/2014
I liked your story And can you please do a sequel because Harry was so brave when the Durlseys Were mistreating Him Please Have Harry be sorted in The Lions Den in His first yesr
BookNerdANDProud chapter 21 . 8/16/2014
I really liked this
The Lost Rogue chapter 21 . 7/20/2014
Short and sweet :3 I thought it was adorable when Harry slept near Moony and hugged him! So much feels and it just goes to show how non judgemental kids are! Woohoo another favourite author!
amy1232000 chapter 10 . 1/28/2014
Nice
elijahlover chapter 21 . 10/1/2013
I love it soo much but its too rushed! Xx
elijahlover chapter 10 . 10/1/2013
I love it but its way too rushed xx
BrightPetal91 chapter 21 . 10/27/2012
I love your story!
L chapter 21 . 9/2/2012
Nice... Short and a bit one-sentence-only-ish but other than that, nice.
Benpowerman chapter 21 . 7/18/2012
your story made happy just reading it.
V. L. Crawford chapter 12 . 5/1/2012
Great chapter, but Sirius is not childish.
V. L. Crawford chapter 11 . 5/1/2012
I could see this happening.
V. L. Crawford chapter 10 . 5/1/2012
Another great chapter.
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