Reviews for Unexpected Hero
Returned chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
Rereading this again because I loved it so much! :)
emachookie chapter 15 . 2/3/2013
When you say Drama, you really mean drama.

I actually wanted to back out of reading it for some chapters. The whole I will protect you thing was pure evil. I just wanted Tenten to beat Neji up until he couldn't move. That I think was a horribly d*ck move.

I liked that there was a test. I believe that after all they've been through they couldn't just smoothly progress into 'happily ever-after'. It's a nice touch. Added that I also want Neji to suffer. As much as I like him as a character, I actually sort-of hated him here. You could really feel Tenten's desperation is wanting to be a higher rank. It must have sucked to feel like you don't fit in.
Lili Bibi chapter 6 . 1/25/2013
Aww! They all grew attatch to her :)
Lili Bibi chapter 4 . 1/25/2013
Haha Tenten punched Shika on the face X)
Iname Kohaki chapter 6 . 6/27/2012
AWWW! so sweet, Tennie-chan has grown on them!
Iname Kohaki chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
This is gonna be interesting, very interesting. haha
grunty07 chapter 15 . 2/22/2012
Sorry, this is a really late review. XD But I wanted to write one anyway.

Well, the last chapter was sweet, even though the end was abrupt. The story as a whole had too fast of a pace imo, but that happens when authors aren't satisfied with the chapters they're putting out, I guess. _ I felt that there were still some ends that hadn't been tied up yet, but I don't think they're too significant.

I do like that Gai had already been killed off, though. For some reason, I wasn't expecting that, and it added a bit of flavor to the story.

There are other comments I could make, but it's been a while since this fic was completed. So I suppose it won't help much.

Last thing, though, and it's a bit off-topic...

I noticed in one of your A/N's that you went off to a 3-week nerd camp. I've been going to a 3-week nerd camp for the past few summers too, and it's amazing. 8D But this is the first time I've encountered a fellow nerd-camper on FF. We're everywhere, but it's pretty cool when I actually find one. :D

Just thought I'd share that even if you never read this, haha.
Rina chapter 15 . 6/19/2011
To start off, you're a really good writer. I really did like this story. However, as a reader, I would rather wait months for one good chapter than for unedited uninspiring chapters. It was disappointing to see the quality of each chapter dropping, and the same "well, don't expect this chapter to be great" message at the top or bottom. That being said, I still do enjoy reading your NejiTen fics! I really do appreciate the cuteness I see in Neji, and I did like the the top half of this chapter a lot. Keep writing!
Rina chapter 2 . 6/19/2011
AHHH! This was so cute! Also the characterization of Neji and Tenten is so spot on, I'm so glad you didn't make them too sugary. OK, I will continue reading this
Kyanie chapter 4 . 9/27/2010
Pretty funny chapter with a bit of angst towards the end. Like it though
Kyanie chapter 3 . 9/26/2010
Lol! I'm enjoying reading the jealous, over-protective Neji :D
Kyanie chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
Nice! Pretty interesting 1st chapter
ferbfletcherlover chapter 15 . 9/19/2010
the end was crappy,but overall it passed my standards :D
xxXForgottenLoveXxx chapter 8 . 5/28/2010
your story is really interesting cant wait to see how it turns out! loving it soo far!
Nanannacyy chapter 15 . 5/23/2010
awww that was sweet ;) after all those hard times the end makes it up ;D i'm glad for all of them
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