|Reviews for Water Lilies|
| Lazard chapter 1 . 9/14/2007
Wow. That was beautiful!
| Childhood Aspirations chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
I think this piece was beautifully worded; it painted such lovely pictures for the mind. You have a very descriptive way with words. Excellent job!
| Zaz9-zaa0 chapter 1 . 6/8/2007
Amazing what one can do with the lack of given character interaction. :)
| Zuraffo chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
This is very good. A fanfic with some literature values. The very feminine feel of this article is dully noted.
| the Harechan chapter 1 . 3/28/2007
This is fantastic! With the imagery at the beginning, I'm able to see the garden. Although, I think my favorite line is, "Knowing means nothing, and picking life apart will not salvage it," is poignant and very true for anyone.
| Luthien Amarie chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
Usually, I like writing reviews that are somehow, well, different from those a story has received, to add a bit of constructive criticism or to mention something or point something out that could be of any use to the author (except making him or her feel good about others liking his or her work)... But I fear there is not much to say here that hasn't already been expressed by others before me, in much shorter ways, but still down to the point.
This is downright ingenious... I love the serene atmosphere created, the calmness and pure beauty of it all. And even though there isn't much story or plot to it, it is still intriguing... No, it is intriguing because of it. Because you captured a beautiful, somehow tender moment involving two lovely characters, a moment where they fit in perfectly. Especially Fran... Somehow, with every single word, you created an atmosphere perfectly matching the Viera.
Oh, how I hate lacking the words to describe what's in my head... Allright, I'll try: Somehow this whole scene reminded me of the Viera village, and I could almost hear the ethereal, beautiful music from the game (the theme of the Viera Village, I unfortunately don't know the song's name). Not one single word appeared out of place, no, all and everything fitted together perfectly well. And I, for myself could really feel how much you love writing, and "playing" with the language...
But after all, all my ramblings above are... well, I don't know... They feel somehow out of place. , I just wanted to compliment you for this amazing piece... Keep up the great work, and continue to present the world with such beautiful pieces of work. They're what really makes fanfictions worth attention, and everyone who refuses to aknowledge that is to be pitied. They don't know what they miss.
| Ktjn chapter 1 . 3/6/2007
Lovely, wonderful and poignant.
| Mithrigil chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
Elegant, delicate, and lovely.
| CrissCrossedHaiku chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
Wonderful, and very poignant. I love the pacing.
| sapereaude13 chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
This was lovely and quite unexpected. I really enjoyed the interaction between Ashe and Fran, something we didn't see much of in the game.
| Sweet Valentine chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
This is stunning. Beautiful language, and nice interaction between two great characters. Wonderful work!
| sheena the summoner chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
wow. that was one of the deepest most poetic things i have ever read. it was amazing. it was beautiful. i don't think i have ever read something this deep on fanfic before. I hope u continue writing. you have a gift.