Aw, Bella is embarrassed and feeling insecure. So typical. E and A are cute for helping her, though I'm sure Bella would just appreciate not having an audience, lol.

Well, I'm disappointed. First there is no more & second SM had opportunity for Cullen pranks with all those books & didn't use it. Sniff sniff.
This was certainly entertaining though, thanks so much.

You would think she would be happy so many others were protecting her .

(Mike, Tyler, etc) are flat characters. Of course this is to further draw attention to Edward's often obnoxious perfection, but it gets pretty unrealistic. I LOVED the way you wrote Mike, Tyler, and Eric this chapter - as real human beings, not just pathetic lesser specimens. I feel it's really important to recognize the human side of Twilight, beyond the fast cars and witty banter and apple-catching shit, and to recognize that no one real is actually as perfect as the Cullens, and that's totally not a bad thing. Although I feel I should also point out that Edward's musical tastes ar !

I just wanted to say that I absolutely adored this chapter. We all love Twilight, but it's also pretty clear that Edward's foils (mike

This was really great, bummed that it ended. Thank you

This is awesome! I love the accurate Biblical references between Carlisle's understanding even in the absence of hard evidence "answered prayers as the praying party would want" and Edward's lack of understanding of grace. I will for more of your stories, up lifting as we have similar world views!
David

Super funny! I loved it!

OMG! Emmett in a speedo! ;) *swoons*

Lycanthropy! XD

OH MY GOD! XD I can't stop laughing! Hee hee! How could she believe EDWARD loves her?! Hee hee :)

Really enjoyed me in a good mood after a long day

Pls, I know you probably have dropped this but pls, pls, pls,, continue, pls.

This is really good. I love this. I laughed so hard when Edward made the ball fly into the parking lot my sister, sitting next to me fell out of the couch!

High School Track & Field. i ran track & field. waasn't any good, but i did it.

We were standing around waiting our turn to practice the discus throw. The girl (not me) in the circle did her rotation and the disc flew nice and smoothly off her hand. Bad news was that it slipped smoothly off her hand on the back of the circle and nailed one of the girls (not me) in the face. Managed to break her check bone, luckily it did not damage her eye.