Basched chapter 3 . 12/30/2008
Wow! This was a really sexy and rauncy piece of writing! I know it couldn't have been easy for you, because I'm trying to still write my first one!

And English is not your first langauge! Then you have my total and utter praise at this piece of work!

WOW! Nick and Sofia has always been my favourite pairing for CSI and having read this...I don't think I could picture him with any one else! EVAR!

Well done, I loved it! Yet where you ever thinking of writing what would happen afterwards? Tomorrow? ;)
Samsara Dallire chapter 3 . 11/10/2007
Girl, I know what you mean about the trials of writing smut.

You, however, have done an amazing job of writing something that is absolutely titillating. Something that I could read to get in the mood whenever the man of my dreams comes through my front door. Hopefully, George Eads, but that's not gonna happen soon. Dang!
barqualounger chapter 1 . 4/13/2007
Okay, so I've just now discovered this story but ... YAY! I could totally see Nick and Sofia together.
LocoGreggo chapter 3 . 4/9/2007
Wow...intense. Not a bit overly done and still an interesting

Orange Sodie chapter 3 . 4/9/2007
Okay, that was the sweetest (and hottest) thing ever. You have a great talent for writing porn. It's hard to find realistic sex in the fanfic world, but you did great. Eagerly awaiting the next part!
RenLissa chapter 3 . 4/8/2007
You can always get a new keyboard . . . .

and after reading that chapter, the only question I have is why the keyboard needs to be "talked" into anything. Update soon.
tvaddict42 chapter 3 . 4/8/2007
OMG! That was H-O-T!
notesofwimsey chapter 3 . 4/7/2007
Damn, girl, that was so hot your computer must be going up in flames by now! Are you sure you can manage to do this again!

I hadn't thought of Nick and Sofia, but I like it and think this worked brilliantly! Thanks for the tip!
LocoGreggo chapter 2 . 3/23/2007
Interesting set up and pairing. Please continue.
Orange Sodie chapter 2 . 3/22/2007
Keep going, keep going, keep going, keep going! This is awesome and Nick/Sofia is an amazing pairing.
Lexa Kenzie chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
Take it to Nicks. Lol. Great story. Write more soon.
Orange Sodie chapter 1 . 3/5/2007
The majority chants: PORN!
CaptainK8 chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
I for one would love to see where this is going! There are absolutely not enough Sofia stories out there, and this pairing is also rather unusual, and I find it intriguing!
sparklin-strawberries chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
Wow, just out of curiosity, what is your first language? This was amazing. I say you take it further to them going back to Nick's. Kudos to you for a great story.