|Reviews for The Forgetting Game|
| Primarch Zero chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
damn this is good
| KukiRew chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
Very well written!
| RedTideZero chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
Good story, I like the concept of “The Forgetting Game” itself instead of just “get pissed and pass out”. Plus “take charge” Ino is kind of hot. An enjoyable read, keep it up.
| DeliberateEffort chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
The Hidden Village feared the day when she finally learned how to project meaningful backdrops out of nowhere, as Gai-sensei and his student were prone to do. Though most doubted that her backdrops would be as peaceful as the setting sun…
aww and you ended it with duch fluff and flair
I would LOVE to see you write a story about Rock lee...gawd...the hilarity.
| Paosheep chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
I like this one.
| HannahSakura.Pinoy chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
| dancer4ver chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
That was awesome! I love both characters and the writing was brilliant! Great Story!
| SHADOW DRAGON TWISTER chapter 1 . 12/3/2007
wow...now thats cool )
| Rawrmander chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
Beautiful, just beautiful.
The ending was stunning to say the least, the images, the message, it hit home.
I know this fic is "old" by now, but since I just got into reading them, I'm glad I stumbled upon this one, it shows the markings of a true writer.
| RakeeshJ4 chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
Interesting story! Hmm, I have to admit, this is one of the better-handled Naruto-Ino...erm..segues?...into a relationship that I've read. Most of them center around Ino using her mind-swapping technique on Naruto, either intentionally or accidentally. That particular idea can be executed well, but it's overused IMO.
Nice inclusion of Asuma's last words to Ino, too: they're words I've thought about, more than once: what the hell do they mean? It seems highly unlikely that they mean, "Don't let Sakura win Sasuke," to say the least! But then again, for Asuma to mean, "Win Naruto before Sakura does," he'd have to know what I suspect, that Sakura is getting (finally) some romantic feeling for Naruto, AND that Ino might have such feelings as well. No, I think Asuma's words just meant, "Don't let Sakura beat you at love," in the sense of, "Find love yourself, and don't play her games," but who knows?
Anyway, good marks as well for humor, spelling, and grammar. Now, to plunder your profile!
| Riiiceballe chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
Wow this is nice! :) ::hands you internet cookies::
| loaned chapter 1 . 6/14/2007
O.O...that was deep. Good job, I'm gonna remeber that game for later. Might help when I get older..;.
| MonkeysTotallyRock chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
'' a wonderful little sidequest. it was delightful.
| Orismoris chapter 1 . 6/4/2007
Nice, it was sure different read than the other Naru/INo I like. But this is one just appeals to me and I ended up liking it more. I'm making no sense am I, well forget what I just said. I loved your one-shot hope to see more Naru/Ino from you.
| Suicidal-kun chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
Sweet story I'm gonna read all the installments for you seem to have a pretty interesting writing style and you give yourself too little credit, for this writing piece is really good.