Reviews for Harry Potter and the Enemy Within |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, this is officially severitus-canon. I love the fact that neither Snape nor Harry get softer or change behaviour out of the blue. Now I'm reading the sequel, thank you for writing this |
![]() ![]() Very well done. You not only wove an entirely believable and entertaining tale but used some points from ~later~ in canon, e.g., Snape's position and Harry-Ginny, that were far from certain at your time of writing. Characterizations were excellent. There were also ~far~ fewer English errors than most. All in all, very satisfying. High kudos! |
![]() ![]() Congrats! for devising a plausible reason to give No. 12 to Lupin. Good idea and unique AFAIK. Ditto for the blood-wards' uselessness against a resurrected TMR. I probably won't review very much since it greatly slows the reading, but this looks now like a better fic than most. |
![]() ![]() not on chapter one, but I'm posting via desktop. Love the relationship between Harry and Snape, love the tidbits of everyday life at Hogwarts, I can't wait till it's night and I can finally read another chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! |
![]() ![]() This was absolutely delightful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just don't find it realistic snape poisoning harry and then duelling him...it all seems too much OOC |
![]() ![]() ![]() SO GOOD omg this story had me hooked ur awesome, thank you for this |
![]() ![]() :O |
![]() ![]() ooh |
![]() ![]() oooooh Interesting premise |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don’t know what Im expecting from this fic but so far I am appalled at Snape’s behavior! Locking him up after poisoning him? Even if it’s not fatal, it was pretty nasty of him to do so. I don’t know how I feel about this... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this story... so so so good! Definitely one of my favorites |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was the best fic I have ever read for sure! You are so talented, and the relationship between Harry and Snape went exactly as I imagined it! Can't wait to read the sequel |
![]() ![]() Well, I was wrong about Ryan, and why does your writing make me more emotional than She-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named's did? |