Okay, this is officially severitus-canon.
I love the fact that neither Snape nor Harry get softer or change behaviour out of the blue. Now I'm reading the sequel, thank you for writing this

Very well done. You not only wove an entirely believable and entertaining tale but used some points from ~later~ in canon, e.g., Snape's position and Harry-Ginny, that were far from certain at your time of writing. Characterizations were excellent. There were also ~far~ fewer English errors than most. All in all, very satisfying. High kudos!

Congrats! for devising a plausible reason to give No. 12 to Lupin. Good idea and unique AFAIK. Ditto for the blood-wards' uselessness against a resurrected TMR.

I probably won't review very much since it greatly slows the reading, but this looks now like a better fic than most.

not on chapter one, but I'm posting via desktop.
Love the relationship between Harry and Snape, love the tidbits of everyday life at Hogwarts, I can't wait till it's night and I can finally read another chapter

Awesome story!

This was absolutely delightful!

I just don't find it realistic snape poisoning harry and then duelling him...it all seems too much OOC

SO GOOD
omg this story had me hooked ur awesome, thank you for this

:O

ooh

oooooh Interesting premise

I don’t know what Im expecting from this fic but so far I am appalled at Snape’s behavior! Locking him up after poisoning him? Even if it’s not fatal, it was pretty nasty of him to do so. I don’t know how I feel about this...

Wow this story... so so so good! Definitely one of my favorites

This was the best fic I have ever read for sure! You are so talented, and the relationship between Harry and Snape went exactly as I imagined it! Can't wait to read the sequel

Well, I was wrong about Ryan, and why does your writing make me more emotional than She-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named's did?