Reviews for Water
Nath chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
nice and sweet. A moment of peace in Atlantis.
Scifan chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
Very sweet story. Thank you.
CharmedAli chapter 1 . 3/26/2007
Very good but it ends really abruptly without a kind of real elnind, is it because you are writing more? well written I like your descriptions.
PurpleYin chapter 1 . 3/15/2007
An exotically sweet tale, nice for both their relationship and for her character and past.
renisanz chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
Oh my goodness, how could you end it so abruptly? That's just too cruel. Otherwise, great story.
Camy chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
Oh, this is wonderful...nice idea and a different perspective...beautiful...AW, John washing Teyla's clothes...now that is nice!
mtee1958 chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
I think that was sweet and touching. Just the 2 of them, doing something calm and peaceful... together.

I think that would be something good for John's soul as well.
jtjaforever chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
I really like this piece. It would be good to see something of this sort on the show. Teyla has learned many of their customs but w/the exception of one or two we know little of Teyla's.

Thanks for sharing.
ocean chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
Very sweet. Loved it. Thanks for sharing.
honeybadgerhook chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
Very sweet story. I'm not one for Sheyla, but very sweet.
ayrstar chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
So wonderful and beautiful. I can actually picture this happening on the show, all though they are unlikely to film such a sensual bonding scene.