|Reviews for The Switch|
| ToS.Lover5 chapter 3 . 4/16/2012
I wish you continued this :(
| xEren-Jaeger chapter 3 . 9/29/2011
Martel, please... Update this! ;_;
| Little Cruxis Fool chapter 3 . 5/9/2011
...Lack-age of more awesomeness!
This is really awesome and funny! Is it gonna continue?
| Pensola chapter 3 . 1/3/2008
Wow... this is getting dark. I like that :D
I can't find anything wrogn with this chapter, so I guess you did it good.
Bwahahaha, Raine got a shock when Kratos answered two questions right... I laughed there. However, I thought she would get suspicious when Kratos apologised in such a good manner. Well, anyway. I can't wait until you continue the story!
| Pensola chapter 2 . 1/3/2008
It's good and all, like last chapter, but I think you should cut away the "sigh"s when the characters talk. You could maybe use "Kratos sighed" before writing what he says or something.
And I got confused when Noishe got to know it was Kratos in Lloyd's body, but when he finds Lloyd in Kratos' body, he doesn't know anything. It could be that Lloyd's view is before Kratos', thus making Noishe knowing about Kratos from the chaoter's beginning. But if so, you should've switched the places so the confusion didn't need to take place.
Else, great chapter. Can't wait to read next part!
| Pensola chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
Wow, I'm looking forward to this. So Kratos and Lloyd switched bodies, huh...? :D
But i'm a little confused. Since Lloyd lloyd is the son of an angel, he's half-angel, right? Then, how can he do demonic attacks when he should be able to do angelic? Unless it's a future plot...
I really hope this story continues!
| Lemonaden'ice chapter 3 . 11/21/2007
Poor Uncle Bill...
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| LunaLocket chapter 3 . 9/4/2007
the story is getting update soon
| CatMuto chapter 3 . 8/30/2007
I want to read more!
Since I read out some parts loud to myself (like Llatos xD being good at school and Kroyd talking to Noishe - I do noishes voice)
it makes me laugh.
And I realized, that my voice has gone pretty deep ..
Keep on writing! XD
| Demons Hiding chapter 3 . 7/19/2007
Reminds me of Freaky Friday.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
| Aiwethryne chapter 3 . 3/21/2007
Nooiisshhe! Cwute! Anywhoo... Hee hee! Yeah, I was able to finally get on the computer and read this chap.
| Fehize chapter 3 . 3/19/2007
Wow... Noishe is so... tense... XD
But I ADORED the fact that Kratos was all being all "I-am-a-genius" subconcously. That was funny, especially Raine's opionion of it. (Even better was that it reminded me of Matilda... rofl)
| freakyanimegal chapter 3 . 3/19/2007
Ouch, what happened to Kratos...? However, I find his school 'act' that was really bad was wonderfully funny! Is this on my favs yet...? It's going on right now.