Reviews for An Old Haunt for a New Hunt
carocali chapter 2 . 3/4/2007
My French is pretty rusty, but doesn't that mean potato lake? Hee hee. And you are certainly right about the midwestern charm. I can see Edna mother-henning them and comping the pie. Nice OC.

So this Diane character seems to be a bit of a problem. Not your average salt and burn if she can push Dean right away into the lake. Not good - at all! How is Sam going to get him out of there if he can't even bend over?

More please!


Harikari chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
Great start! I can't wait to read more.
pizzapixie chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
Very interesting beginning. I like the way you wove pneumonia coupled with a rib injury. And making it Dean's fault. Can't wait for you to update!Well done!
friendly chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
great start... keep up the great work chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
Enjoyed that chapter, omg Sam with pneumonia and broken ribs and Dean feeling guilty! Look forward to more
Faith the Apostle chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
Nana56 chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
I really had to laugh at the motel room! A lot of us have stayed in a place like that at one time or another. Well done.

This was a great first chapter and I'm hooked. You are going to continue, right? This wasn't 'the old haunt', I'm guessing. Looking forward to the next chapter!
carocali chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
An interesting start so far. I always love how Sam just seems so at home with the computer in a bar while Dean hustles. It's just a natural thing for them. The beating up part? Not so much..

And where did Sam pick up Pneumonia? Yikes! That's not fun, especially with broken ribs. Poor thing! Hopefully he'll be able to kick it and they'll be safely on their way.

However, I have a feeling that probably won't happen...

And congrats on the Avon walk! You should be very proud!


ephiny63 chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
Hey there sweety,

great start to your new story, and the details of the motel room are great.

I am looking forward to seeing where you take the story.

hugs Shelly
Phx chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
I like it! But then again I like hurtSam and guiltyDean - a nice change from the usual hurtDean and guiltySam that I've seen a lot of, of late :)

And I had to laugh at the Murphy bed. I can just see the distressed look on dean's face when he saw it! Hilarious!

I liked the banter between the brothers -

Can't wait to see where the story goes.

Colby's girl chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
Great start to the story. I like the dialogue you've written. It's a very good match to the actual characters. You've captured the banter between the guys and the way they both speak volumes in very few words and a simple look.
Dawn Vesper chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
love it...poor he gets stuck with the crap bed...


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