|Reviews for Transcendence|
| Thrills and Frills chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
Well, I'm going to ignore your pen-name, because I thought Twilight was one of the worst books I've ever read (Bleh!).
Ha, anyway, I liked this fic. You made me really sympathize with Mugen and your writing is just beautiful. The only problem I had was with the beginning, I had some trouble figuring out what was going on, but that might just be because it's early in the morning for me.
| Kendra Luehr chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
Oy ve, you made my heart hurt...Mugen's my favorite! ::huggles him protectively:: And you made me hate Fuu! I never hate Fuu! And Jin, too! lol ::kicks:: I personally never really saw much of a connection between JinFuu since Fuu seemed to move on to Mugen after he found Shino...or that's how it all seemed to me. ::shruggeth mine shoulders:: I don't think I could ever find their love to be 'hot' since they're such gentle/sweet people...Fuugen is rowr because it's intense. XD Mwuahahaha But anywhos, I could see this scenario, because if the love of my life went off with my rival I'd have this 'fuck you' attitude and probably spiral out of control just like you portrayed Mugen. ::cries:: Wow, sorry...I'm just really protective of his character since I love him so much, eheh. ; After all, crude jerk-offs are majorly fun to write. :) Overall, nice job...depressing, but still well-written. ;0D
| Lanky Nathan chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
0.0 fantastic. I love a good story and this in one. I'm a little sleepy so I had to go over a few bits a couple of times but thats ok. Its a sadish story and I really dig them. Good on ya :D