|Reviews for Once More To The Frontier|
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/27/2013
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/19/2013
Please update! This is one of the best abilityshipping fics I've read plus I want to know what Ash was accused for.
| LightRayPearlshipper chapter 12 . 5/18/2013
Lol, funny ending.
| LightRayPearlshipper chapter 8 . 5/18/2013
I get it. The media wants dirt on them for some reason and the clicks are camera shots.
| LightRayPearlshipper chapter 7 . 5/18/2013
She already did when she met him. After she lost to him, it was shown that she had a crush on him.
| LightRayPearlshipper chapter 6 . 5/18/2013
Dun dun duhhhhhh! Drama! He was framed by a new criminal orginization or old one under cover and his friends and the league betrayed him. He hardly has heart for battling anymore, but he still loves his pokemon.
| ShinyAeon chapter 12 . 6/18/2012
This is well-written and all, but until you reveal what crime Ash was accused of and WHY his closest friends would think him guilty (while his enemies and rival believe him innocent) it's hard to get into the story completely. I just can't imagine anything that would cause such a reaction...I mean, even on seeing a videotape of Ash allegedly committing a crime, I still can't see Brock, Misty, Tracey, Professor Oak and everyone actually believing he did it-it would be too easy for someone to fake such a thing, and they would know that-Brock and Misty have met Duplica, and all of them know what a Ditto is.
You seem to be implying that Professor Oak had something to do with Ash's framing, but if he set up her son, I can't imagine there's any way Delia would stay married to him. It's a dramatic situation and very emotionally affecting, but I really can't see it having happened in the first place, not with everyone still remaining in character. They just know Ash too well. I can't say it's TOTALLY impossible, because good writing is capable of some amazing things, but until I actually see what went down, I can't judge if it fits or not. On a gut level, though, I can't help but doubt the basic set-up. If nothing else, everyone knows Ash is too dense to be a criminal mastermind (lol).
Still, it IS well-done and interesting, so I'd love to see more of it...but at the moment, you still haven't quite sold me on the situation.
| WhiteEagle1985 chapter 12 . 10/8/2011
A very good story so far, I cannot wait for the next chapter to come out!
| Moonless Sky Rinna chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
i love this atory i read it 5 times already! (the whole thing) anyways this story looks/sounds like a squeal do you have the pre-squeal?
| ultimate question chapter 12 . 6/28/2010
This is one of the best ability shipping stories i probably have ever read.I understand that your interests in writing lie elsewhere, but we would all appreciate if you just updated this one in a while.
Best of luck in your writing!
| The Great Butler chapter 2 . 5/18/2010
Read three chapters, loving it so far. Will review more when I read it all.
| ghhfkxugsbit chapter 12 . 4/7/2010
when r u gunna update? its 2010!
| Gerbilftw chapter 11 . 2/9/2010
Come on... You have THREE AWESOME pokemon-stories that you haven't updated in years! Instead you're wasting your great talent in updating things like 'code-grass' or something like that!
Is it so hard to write an ending, or at least TELL your readers that you're quitting/taking a break from the story!
Sigh, I'm really looking forward for all of your pokemon-stories!
| gabriel chapter 12 . 2/7/2010
C'mon,finish it!Its one of the best abilityshipping I ever read and it can't remain unfinished!This story is just too great to be put aside!Please by the love of good God,Arceus and the most sacred things finish it!I'M BEGIN!PLEASE!please please please please please please!Or else i'll cry!bua!snif...snif...
| joe chapter 12 . 1/29/2010