Reviews for Bloody Baron
AmyCoolz chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
"You didn't save my life, you ruined my death!" I know you "borrowed" it, but I NEED to know where you got that line from! I've been searching for it for what seems like forever! And for the life of me I cannot remember what story it was!

If you know, PLEASE tell me! But this story of yours is really good, too.

AmyCoolz
freysan chapter 1 . 6/3/2007
word of the day...er..fic..."bloody!"

nice though...(n.n)
Spurned Mephistopheles chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
Emo with a happy ending! Very good.

Ciao,

SM
sixbynine chapter 1 . 3/5/2007
'Harry began to basically bounce him on his shaft'

PLEASE don't use basically like this! this may just be personal but i feel it shows inability to find the proper descriptive term or just laziness when it come to writing it out in full. and it just reads wrong.

other than that an excellent story :D nice plot and (apart from the above:D) good writing
westkitsune chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
Definitely improved...:D And most definitely gotten hotter! *_*
BleedingHeart chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
woah details...!
reicheruchan chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
aw~ so sweet~
phoenix-echelon chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
gah...disturbed...very...disturbed...