Reviews for Our World
alyssa-kaye chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
This story was so sad, how could renji just stand there and let them be...
I guess when you really love someone, you have to let them go.

But question though did byakuya like him too or he was just reassuring renji just to make him feel better?

Anyways a great story well done my friend!
Syuuk chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
you don't need to be observent to notice and understand that part . hm i like this FF. so much feeling&angsty love it. (yup i'm sadistic like that)
Katharine chapter 1 . 5/26/2007
That was absolutely perfect, I love it. It's odd, because it was pretty short, but every line was packed with feeling. It didn't need to be any longer, you got everything that was required [and more] across. amazing.
Denkoumaru chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
I liked it a little sad, but the ending it could be his life ends, like this moment in life with him near his love has ended. Thats what I was thinking... Are you going to write more?
lumo chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
u don't know what ur own stuff means?
Nalana chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
An interesting little AU. I quite enjoyed it. Almost wish it was a little longer. Any chance you'll be expanding this?
AuroraRose14 chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
this is an interesting concept. Poor renji, he just can't win. I'm glad you added a note of explanation after the story, it helped clear some things up. good job :)