Reviews for Fragile Blossoms of Spring
anlmoon chapter 24 . 3/4/2016
cool excerpts of her thoughts
Kohaku Kawa chapter 24 . 4/13/2007
Cages- what I great idea! I love that you added a part about Neji too, the contrast is nice.

she, unlike him, had no room to even stretch her wings.

this is such a great line! and it's sadly so true.
Kohaku Kawa chapter 23 . 4/13/2007
Ha, you dedicated one to Envy, that's great!

This is an awesome reflection. It shows a side of Hinata that we've never seen but is most likely there.
Kohaku Kawa chapter 22 . 4/13/2007
(the last review was for flight)

Pray- again, great drabble. I love the contrast between Hinata and the other ninja.

Did you notice that the ruthless ninja are PREYing on the other ninja? I thought it made a nice touch.
Kohaku Kawa chapter 21 . 4/13/2007
heh, so much for being a faithful reviewer. But I'm back now! I love this one!

You move so fluidly tfrom her watching the hawk to her flying herself.
Falling Tears of Death chapter 24 . 4/9/2007

here you go again...being breath-takingly amazing.

please stop it...its not good for my health.i do need air actually.

but anyways...this line:she, unlike him, had no room to even stretch her wings.

is soo profound.

im in awe of its profoundness.

ok good job
Falling Tears of Death chapter 23 . 3/28/2007

its in love with with it

that means i will be stalkin u 4 updates nd new stories nd reiview *cackle*

be afraid...very afriad...

on the other hand...i love the themes of these ficlets..they are all so simple yet profound

keep it up
MeowSap chapter 24 . 3/27/2007
Ok, so apparently 23 is the only chapter not working for me. XP Again, good chapter - I loved the last line of this drabble. :) Keep up the good work!
MeowSap chapter 22 . 3/27/2007
COOL! I've never had a fic chapter really dedicated to me before - and that one is one of my favorites too! :D That was great! I haven't read the last two though - it keeps telling me that the chapters haven't been uploaded by the site yet. I would have reviewed sooner, but it keeps telling me the same thing! XP So I don't know what the deal is. But I hope I can read them soon, you're doing great!
der kapitan chapter 21 . 3/25/2007
Waho! These are all really good! I think my favorite one is probably the one with Neji... Just 'cause it's really cute. XD And I'd love to see that one actually happen lol. But stupid fanfiction won't let me see day 22. -pouts- and you need to get up-to-date. XD

... And I really need to finish my Dialictical journals. XD
Evolved chapter 20 . 3/23/2007
Kohaku Kawa chapter 20 . 3/22/2007
kill- very nice. I liked how you had Kurenai talking to Asum. It showed that they are used to killing by now.

The blood stains haunting her was very MacBeth-ish. I liked that too.
Falling Tears of Death chapter 13 . 3/22/2007
these keep gettin better.

im actually begining to care about hinta as a

idk how youve done it...but please continue
xOProcrastinator chapter 20 . 3/21/2007
These are really really good -applaudes- I love how you portray Hinata (haha good verb use, no? xD) -gives thumbs up sign of youthfulness-
MeowSap chapter 20 . 3/21/2007
Yay! New chapters! Very nicely done, as usual. You have a great talent for description. :) Keep it up! You only have a few more days left! XD
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