Reviews for Kisses Of Fire
Peggy47 chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
Beautiful story. Your references to fire-burning, embers, and roaring flames-describe his kisses and the feelings she had inside her body.

Constructive criticism-

I imagine that Grissom had a hard time opening the door with a 'king'. He needed a 'key'.

Check the dictionary-

You wrote/You should have written-

unmistakeable/unmistakable

brough/brought
jtbwriter chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
This is very sweet-I love how Gris didn't care who saw him-what a story! LOL!

Thanks for the treat!
Lizwontcry chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
I wish I could write like that!