Reviews for Unease
animabella1901 chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
this was really really good :D
lovexisxamazing86 chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
continue definately.
Wileret chapter 2 . 10/18/2007
Poor Jasper T_T don’t feel so guity! Don’t you see that Bella forgive you? Oh, and now Edward gr this men are so complicated. I still a bit mad with Edward coz he broke Bella’s heart and yes, I know, he had a explanation but hm the bad thing it’s that Edward it’s so incredible! That it’s almost impossible to be mad with him. I don’t understand one thing, if Alice saw what Edward was going to do Why she dind’t stop him? Did she allow to do it? Probably Edward was very very furious if he managed to convince all the family to move on T_T I still crying when I rembember all what happened. And one thing to say, I hope that you are going to keep on writing… it’s so exciting reading in JPOV! It’s very different coz always it’s Bella or Edward who it’s telling the storie and this doesn’t mena that I don’t like it _. I see you at the next chappie!
socialxhazard chapter 2 . 10/5/2007
Keep going its really good ]
AimeLaire chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
Hm... option b sounds really awesome!

...Though, option a sounds pretty interesting too...

(...Decisions, Decisions...)

But anyways, it's awesome! Gotta love the Jasper 3
stacey chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
AW! its very heartwarming! and yet at the same time full of guilt of both Jasper and Alice! nice interpretation of Jasper's point-of-view! i still hold to what i said before. i like your style of writing! -an author...and a fan of this story
Toxique chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
You should continue in Jaspers POV! This is really good!
just me.an author chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
that was awesome. I think you should continue in jasper's POV. Keep it up!
Isabel Hale chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
I think you should continue this in Jasper's POV.
Addie W chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
I'd like to see both, actually...

But that's just me being greedy. :D

I would like to see another chapter or two in Jasper's PoV, if that helps any. :)

Please update again soon!

Addie