|Reviews for Amateur Psychology|
| Riya3 chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
Amazing. Simply amazing.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
Depressing, if very well written. I much prefer the Hanabi depicted in Journey Of The Three Failures
| onlytoask chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
That was really fantastic. I'm not sure I got the full meaning behind it though.
| wittyying chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
I see you've written this a while back and left it up. Thank you.
Hanabi is a girl trying to find herself. And bravely does so as she ponders, questions, confronts, and discovers. Very perceptive.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
It doesn't seem to be enough, I understand that every story needn't reach a final conlcusion, but there is just too much left uncertain to even draw a conclusion from.
| L-pandora chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
APPLAUSE! I like the way you write and the way you portray Hanabi. A nice sophisticated change of pace from the usual fandom blah. Thumbs up!
| Numaron chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Absolutely Crazy man. I don't where you got the idea,
but brilliant. Definetely originally written, there are but a
few dozen authors here on with the ability&
capacity to write that well, with an sophisticated vocabulary
embracing the perspective inner thoughts and psychological
analysis of the characters/ mainly the protagonist
which you pour into this story.
| thewonderingman chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
this story was interesting to say the least I didn't really like it but it was worth reading for a couple of reasons.
1. is the way you portrayed the characters was actouly fascinating I like the non-stuttering hinata.
2. the way you write it is unlike any other story. so it is worth reading do to its various unique qualitys.
other than that the story was just strange.
| tik tok chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
that story made me think made me sad and most of all see hinabi in a whoooole new way theres only one other word to say ...wow
| Wandering the Arid Sea chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
| kelsey chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
wow - that was amazing ! please update
| JaMisa27 chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
eh that was pretty awesome!
| Madam Melanquet chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
This story was drastically beautiful, and I suppose the only way to explain that that statement would be to say; perfectly flawed.
I am sorry that my words may not make sense, and that I don't review your wonderfully written works, but this painted story was amazing - leaving me breathless with a feeling of almost-confusion but mostly-wonderment; An image burnt into my retinas.
I love your writing, to put it simply, and I wish you the best of luck with the future publication of your book. :)
| silver neko girl chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
Beutiful. This could(should?) be a live-action movie. Drama, dysfunctional incest(the only kind I can stomach), and an edge of insanity; a girl's quest to realize where exactly she fits.
On the pairings; I could almost say that there were touches of a Hiashi/Hanabi, and I was hoping for just a morsel of Hanabi/Moegi. Just my thoughts
Anyway, I'm telling you: Movie(fan-made), man. It would be epic. But you'd get sued if you made any money... Shame.
| blackraven615 chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
The story was very insightful. I admire the level of thought and maturity you put into this. A very good read.