Reviews for These bloody eyes of mine
pandalarios999 chapter 12 . 4/15
good job
No chapter 4 . 1/3
Lughtningi s weak against air. He shod have won that contest without the need to use hiraishin.
ShadowFireHime-Sama chapter 5 . 7/14/2015
itachi kisame please be ok please
Guest chapter 12 . 9/16/2014
Ultrus Prime chapter 4 . 2/23/2014
Intresting chapter. About Kakashi copying Hyoton thats impossible the sharingan can't copy sub element. And again wind element can't be copyied like that kakashi would have killed himself wi what he did according to NARUTO SHIPPUDEN
froger495 chapter 12 . 11/25/2013
cant wait for the next chapter.
Guest chapter 12 . 11/3/2013
Nice story please continue
kefla.randall chapter 12 . 6/24/2013
Please. Make more
ougley chapter 12 . 6/21/2013
thank you :)
DeAngelo6997 chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
Epic last sentence lol. Love the way you write, it's very entertaining.
Lord Mortensen chapter 12 . 2/11/2013
Awesome! update soon!
kage kitsune 14 chapter 12 . 11/5/2012
Damn cliffie. Update soon.
2c chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Interesting concept with the sharigan.

I'm disappointed in your characterization of sakura though.

While she's way too hung up on Sasuke, she does care for other people and their health. She matured greatly since the chunnin exam. To make her petty and single-minded like that is to revert her into a one-dimensional character.

It makes it hard to take your story seriously.

I can see Naruto taking Sasuke's betrayal hard, 'cause it's real, but Sakura's is just a flat plot device technique.
maddogandre chapter 12 . 11/6/2011
the fic is awesome but its been a while since i've read this fic its seem you have abandonded this fic if it has been adopted by someone else let me know who please
Sandaime Hokage chapter 12 . 11/2/2011
Wow a very interesting fic, Naruto's not too overpowered even with the sharingan, would love to find out what happens next but it looks like you abandoned this fic, hope you come back and carry on writing.

Peace Out

Sandaime Hokage
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