Reviews for Selfish Desires
GendryMightBeComingBackSoon chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
A great story. Very good.
cheesie chapter 1 . 3/5/2007
Very good... But you should probably rate that "T"... Just some advice. You can go to "Stories", click this one, click "content/chapters", and fix the rating. It's really easy. You have a great talent. Use it well.
Elle-is-odd chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
Thats was so awesome, poor will, I felt really bad for him when Elizabeth kissed Jack in potc: dmc...*sigh* and there are rumors saying that in the third movie potc: awe, Will DIES! :'( but that jsy what I herd! poor Will, stupid Elizabeth, why did she have to go with Jack...ehem..anyways..your story is really good, it i actually thought that he was going to sleep with that girl. but Will wont give up so easy, i'm sure he probably going to try to win her back in the nect movie.

bye bye..(love the story!)