Reviews for Splintered control
Shinigami Merchant chapter 1 . 11/19
I like how you wrote Yoh's character
a-devious-engineer chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
Good story.. why it had to be short? I want them to find out it was yoh..hehe
FallenQueen2 chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
I LOVE this story, still do and always will ahaha. I love how your portrayed Yoh and Hao, I am totally on the same wave length as you. Yoh is for sure more powerful than he lets on and he HAS to be pissed that his family kept the fact he had a twin a secret then is expected to fight/kill him. They are brothers and I totally wished that the anime showed more concern and angst from Yoh about having to fight his TWIN! I would be freaking out if i had to fight my older sister, even worse if it was my twin! But you portrayed Yoh perfectly :D
DaughteroftheRedKing chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
Um, no offense, but it's OOC, not OC. Because OC means Own Character, and if the original characters are your own characters...that doesn't really make sense.
Good story by the way. A little disturbing, but an interesting read.
SK-fan7 chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
it's a very nice story. I really like it!
SilverHaraki chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
:) love the outburst. i've always looked for a story about Yoh letting out his real emotions. found mai story :3
gaap237 chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
Great story. We finally see Yoh's mask slipping and a not so bad Hao. I always wanted to know Yoh's reaction to him and Hao being twins.
A reviewer chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
Great story, it takes pathetic falacy to a whole new level (good thing)

there should be more fics like this. 10/10
Dreamer's Samhain chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
-whistles- you made me look at Yoh in a totally different way. thanks

very well written, and you can feel Yoh's emotion.

hehe. Hao /is/ nice to his little brother huh?

WolfeChilde chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
Could you please make it into a story? I would probably be very interesting
CheshireCatGrin3421 chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
that was really awesome! plz keep it up!
X-Harlequin-X chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
I'd say this is worthy of a sequel
Azure Teriques chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
I like it. The storm was a nice touch
yuriasakura chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
willow of fire chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
that was amazing! And it works, I mean no one can be happy all the time, like Yoh.
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