|Reviews for SugarCoated: The Final Slice|
| Pollzy Claire chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
Favoriting and Following! :'-( that was really really sad and really well written. Your mean though. You made me cry, in all 3 sugar coated. You should make a re-write but with the happy ending so I don't have the bottomless pit feeling onsode me that I get when L dies.
| ChuYumeAkirameru chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
You always make me cry. I don't know if it's just the characters or setting or something, but I do know that you are probably the best author on this entire website that I have witnessed. Even professional books can't make me cry, but your stuff always make me bawl like a baby. I beg of you, to, at least one day, release a real book of your own. When you do, please to god tell me. ( v )
| twinbuster2 chapter 1 . 12/23/2007
I totally love this story
| pandora029 chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
There's still a question left unanswered..."Will she ever love again?"
| SeirenTheReader chapter 1 . 3/17/2007
Aww ! I love you ( NOT THAT WAY ) for making this . It's a happy ending! To tell you the truth I nearly went to the borderline of hating you with the end of the second part! Kassie and Lawliet forever! ( Unless I steal him... eh ,who knows?)
| HOMRA chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
lol, not too sad and not to sweet. just so awesome in the middle, i swear I can never do that. Keep your writing ideas going lol!
| FlurryofIce chapter 1 . 3/5/2007
I likes it! Please keep writing!
| EnpatsuShakugan-Shana chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
Thank you very much for this alternative story, seriously its touching and very meaningful
I know they'll end up together in the afterlife :3
Good job, take care
| KAppa chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
beautiful!great story!Please write another fanfiction Lxoc!Onegai!I beg you!
| TawakeNix chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
Finally, you have put it up I'm not the first one to review but at least I'm the second! xD
Final Slice is nice… even though he's still dead XD
| ikhor chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
Really nice job!