Reviews for One More Second
Folle chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
Very nice. Classical Sakura thought patterns. Sometimes it's just good to write (or read) something logical. Thanks!
FayeValentine00 chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
WONDERFUL! This is exactly how I see NaruSaku! Great job!
Dracofury90 chapter 1 . 8/22/2007
Beautiful! I loved every word of it.
dreamlifter chapter 1 . 7/25/2007
wow. Great, great vision!

this explained some things about 'Break Even', i'm glad that i read this afterwards as this is a much stronger piece. The theme of being right and wrong was done very well.

very accurate way of how naruto and sakura are getting closer together in the real story. very well done.

definitely leaves an impression on the reader
cookiesandcreme27 chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
This story is written so clearly and beautifully. I love it! I love that you broke into Sakura's mind and eventually let her fall into his heart. I really have nothing else to say... it was just all too sweet
emmy.raen chapter 1 . 3/8/2007
Wait. This is a Naru/Saku fic right?

I liked it. Nice detail.
carrot stix chapter 1 . 3/5/2007
wow! I loved it, a nice refreshing approach to narusaku. love it!
Erisabesu chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
Oh wow, I really like how you ended this piece with Sakura running through the drizzle and rushing into his arms before he has time to say too much and ruin the moment. *grins* What a great image, and the logical progression of her thoughts makes it so believable. I totally think that if they get together in the manga it'll be something like this, a rushing hug and a quiet moment, fade to black. Aw! XD

Very nice!
Landlady of the Universe chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
Wa! Adorable! And very insightful.
Quathis chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
Very nice introspection into Sakura's persona. With the way the manga's looking, something like this could be in the near future.
dark Alley chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
this was really good. It's realalistic and everything.
wingsonfire chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
Beautiful...You managed to capture the essence of Naruto and Sakura's relationship.
nuttx chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
I don't really like Naruto/Sakura, or Sasuke/Sakura. Hell, I just don't like Sakura! But this was so beautifully written... the word choice, the style, the way you phrased things...

A beautiful piece of writing; I enjoyed it thoroughly. Thank you for the work.