Reviews for Here's that day you hoped would never come
RMBiehl chapter 31 . 4/5/2021
I very much enjoyed the story, and it was very well written. With that said, I felt the last chapter was rushed and too many loose ends were not tight. What about Sarah's immortality? You made it clear she aged regularly while Underground. Will this be remedied? Also, it would have been nice to include the child's birth and Sarah's coronation. I think a couple more chapters would have given the story a nice round ending.
Margot Grazyna chapter 32 . 3/1/2020
To była wspaniała opowieść, przemknęłam jak burza bez odpoczynku i dopiero teraz mogę się zatrzymać by oddać hołd i sprawiedliwość
Guest chapter 7 . 2/5/2020
Turn of the screw - H James?
Guest chapter 19 . 1/7/2016
This is disturbing, it's a love story about a controlling man and powerless woman... And everyone just seems to accept that instead of questioning it. She didn't chose to live with him and he ignores her feelings and yet she's the one apologising? It's abusive
BaconBaker chapter 22 . 6/20/2015
I usually don't review a story until I've finished it, but this one keeps stopping me in my tracks. There is nothing wrong with it; it's just that it's so well done that I'm almost scared to continue reading. I almost don't want to know what happens. You know what they say about curiosity...
LifeWithouthLove chapter 31 . 12/26/2013
AAAAH! I loved this story! There was just right amount of drama! Y really have talent to write storys!
Bloodsired chapter 32 . 10/14/2013
Excellent story! I can't believe I forgot to review this when I first read it, afterall I'm also a fan of Pika's work. Cheers!
L. Lune chapter 31 . 10/1/2013
Another nice little story! I rather enjoy reading all the different perspectives you choose to portray, and the witty diatribe is always a bonus though sometimes I feel there could be an added layer of depth to the characters and the world you choose to build!
Particularly as your angst ends up more humorous drama, and your drama is oddly more angsty.
Still, it's quite good, else I'd not read so much of it!

You've got a certain flair for writing that is reminiscent of Christine Feehan on her better days or Katie Macalister
I honestly think your forged series in particular, if you changed around the character names, tweaked some descriptions, and edited here and there, you'd have a lovely little trilogy to publish as an original with a publisher like those aforementioned authors.
TashaRose chapter 31 . 9/21/2013
A nice ending. Thank you.
TashaRose chapter 29 . 9/21/2013
{smiles warmly}
TashaRose chapter 26 . 9/21/2013
Some hope at least.
TashaRose chapter 25 . 9/21/2013
Crushed... truly crushed.
TashaRose chapter 18 . 9/21/2013
Oh Jareth ... You Fool
Sahilee chapter 31 . 8/28/2013
That was an amazing story! Very well written, I was so captivated, that I could not stop and read it in one go. You're truly a gifted storyteller :)
Dire Heart chapter 32 . 6/9/2013
I love this story! I cried a bit when Jareth was under that last enchantment though...
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