Honestly one of my favorite retellings of Superman’s origin. I love how you handled the Eradicator, Lois, Jimmy, and Perry. Honestly how Clark joins the Planet and discover his Kryptonian heritage was so well written. It has me anticipating how his first appearance as Superman as well as how Lois becomes her iconic self. I can’t wait to see your ideas for Brainiac, Lex Luthor and the Superman mythos.

You are honestly one of my favorite writers on this site!

I like where you are going with this version of the story. Interested in where you are going with it. My only gripe with is that I think Clark is a little old to find out where he came from. I was thinking more along the lines of 22 or something like that. I mean if that's what you are going for that's different.

I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

Very good! I want to see where you go with this one. Also, thanks for NOT keeping to legend. I like AU stories.