|Reviews for Wayward|
| sortofbored chapter 7 . 11/9/2012
Love it. Excited for more.
| MyLittleAngelxxx chapter 6 . 11/2/2012
Oh my god! Found this little gem recently and absolutely love it! Never thought I'd say this but I love Ash and Gary as Rockets, it makes for awesome banter. I also noticed that this story hasn't been updated for years, but hopefully you'll update, plz?
I need more of this awesomeness!
| crow4pres2k16 chapter 6 . 11/1/2012
Oh wow. I don't normally read pokemon fanfictions but this one is amazing. Your writing style flows perfectly and when you do a persons POV it sounds like them. Just awesome.
| Anonymous1029384756 chapter 6 . 9/12/2012
I am so happy to see an update for this fic. Best Pokemon fic I've read, hands down. I find myself strangely anticipating the decision that Jessie and James will eventually make with their loyalties. It'd be so interesting if they chose to help Ash and Gary, how they might interact with the other rebellion people.
| sortofbored chapter 6 . 9/10/2012
So awesome. I love this story. Cant wait for more.
| SakuraYuki218 chapter 6 . 9/10/2012
Can you write more about what happened to Gray and Ash while they where in Team Rocket? I love this. Can you please update soon.
| Vlad chapter 4 . 7/18/2012
I read the original story for this years ago, and it just popped in my head today. Still one of the best things I've read on this site.
| Misang chapter 5 . 6/27/2012
Oh the shock when I read this story! You are back! I remember reading the original story and I was so sad when it didnt update for so long... Thank you so much for restarting this fic. I look forward reading how this will proceed. This fic is one of rare fics that has depth. I LS2VE YOU
| Kitsura E chapter 5 . 6/22/2012
This is one of the best stories I have ever read, no lie. Your use of imagery is amazing and I love the way you portray the characters. I can't wait for the next chapter
| Acey wolf chapter 5 . 6/22/2012
I absolutely love this so much :) it's one of the few pokemon stories not following the animes plot that I actually like, let alone LOVE :D please continue this story :O I dunno what I'd do if you don't! D:
| Thousand Falls chapter 5 . 6/5/2012
Awww! Ash tells Gary sorry, even though it's Misty freaking out. Wow. That just symbolizes everything right there, doesn't it? How all backwards and yet the same everything is. Good job with that. I really liked it.
| Ewino chapter 5 . 6/2/2012
Thanks for this chapter!
It's funny how alike and unlike this version of the story is from the previous one. I can't wait for you to get to the part where Change of Heart ended...
Thanks, and keep writing! :)
| sortofbored chapter 5 . 6/1/2012
awesome awesome awesome!
love this story, loved the update!
looking forward to the next chapter!
| Miss Duckingsworth chapter 5 . 6/1/2012
Yay An update at last ;D
Poor Ash; he doesn't get a chance to rest, does he. In five chapters he's had broken ribs, a narrow escape from death-by-bungee-without-a-rope, an attack from Bruno, and another near-miss by falling chandeliers only to immediately encounter an army of vicious ghosts. I think he deserves a holiday (or better yet, a trip to the hospital). Poor Gary too, who is constantly at risk of a stress-induced-stroke as a result of his best friend's recklessness.
And all of this whilst enduring the blatant mistrust from former friends, evading Team Rocket and trying to sort out their own moral dilemnas. I really think that Ash and Gary deserve a break, however small, don't you?
Looking forward to the next chapter
| Sailingseas chapter 4 . 5/27/2012
Please continue this!