|Reviews for Wayward|
| be bright chapter 2 . 6/30/2007
YES! Another chapter! I was so excited when I got the email saying you added another chapter. Yes, I have that alert thing for your story.
It's fantastic so far. Good structure, good cliffhanger, GREAT action scenes (I adore action/adventure fics but can't write them myself :P) ...can't wait till the next chapter!
Waiting for a couple months was definitely worth it. I think I'll keep rereading your story until you update, hah. Keep kickin' ass with your story!
~ be bright
| Scribbling Death chapter 1 . 6/26/2007
WAH! So no more Change of Heart? Is this the new and improved one, or are you going to continue both fics?
| smileyaili13 chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
YES! im so pumped. your writing another fic. your one of the best futuristic poke fic writers on the whole site. this is going to be so great and i hope you update pretty quick. ill be checking every day.
| Britannica Moore chapter 1 . 5/24/2007
oh another story. So far the writing seems good but my only "complaint" is whats with the constant name switching? After reading more I realize there codenames...but it seems a bit much have someone call him Ash or Satoshi- and then he refer to himself as the oppisite and then change again. I hope that made some sense...
| Konoha's Kage chapter 1 . 4/29/2007
Great, you're starting up again! I can't wait.
| xheartkreuzx chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
| rockpaperscissor chapter 1 . 4/12/2007
Nice revamp - I think I'll like this much better than the original. What I don't understand, however, is how Giovanni is keeping his end of the deal - wouldn't it be broken if he makes Ash reveal himself, especially since it seems that Ash's concealed identity was part of the deal in the first place?
Maybe I'm overthinking this...
| be bright chapter 1 . 3/26/2007
Great start! I read Change of Heart a few days ago and was baffled when I saw that, one, the story wasn't finished, and two, the last time you updated was a few years ago. So, since this is a revision, I take it you're going to finish this one? Yay! I'm looking forward to whatever's coming up. :)
| thefishbag chapter 1 . 3/14/2007
I'm so glad you're writing Pokemon fanfiction again! I really liked the revision to Change of Heart you made here, it really does work out better. Any plans to finish If I Could Change the World? :) Keep up the good work!
| arccie chapter 1 . 3/8/2007
This is a rather intriguing beginning.
Looks to be an extremely interesting plot you've got planned out.
Been a while since I read any pokemon fics, but your summary really managed to catch my interest.
Looking forward to more.
| alwayslost123 chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
i wuv it! i wonder if misty is going to like ash hm...
| Aseptic chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
When I read the AN, I squeed inside...and outside. It's wonderful to see more Pokemon fanfiction from you. :D! I'm eager to see the changes you make, compared to the old piece. x3 I'm sure it'll all be lovely.
| Milky Etoile chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
Ooh! Revision! I think I like this start better than the other one. Hope you'll continue! Keep up the good work! Take care! Ja ne~
~Milky Etoile .~