Reviews for Cruel Fate
Motherof8 chapter 22 . 8/30/2013
Great story. Loved it. Thanks for writing it
Guest chapter 22 . 8/1/2011
I love this story and how Bella has all these abilities, her being a danger magnet does go well with how she does have them. I hope there is a squeal even if you re-write it-I'm sure it'll be great. If she is still half human though an immortal can she still have kids with Edward? Though I don't see how that's possible-you'll think his sperm with be venom like his blood and saliva. Though

I love the books and S.M. is great but it seems she just threw in the pregnancy thing.
Isabella Nicole Night chapter 22 . 3/17/2011
I love your have amazing ideas and you did mix werewolves and vampires you for shating it with us and good luck with others stories ;)
C.Emily.Taylor chapter 23 . 12/23/2010
Wow... really that's all I can say. I've read that you want to rewrite this stor, but I really love how you wrote it the first time (this time). I can only say that with how amazing this story is,that any other story you write whether it be a rewritten version of this story or any other story would be awesome. I can't explain how much I love this story! Emily
I Loved It chapter 23 . 6/13/2010
realy, this fanfic is one of my FAVS!
marsbareater12 chapter 23 . 3/25/2010
Aw...Good job!
marie1976 chapter 23 . 10/22/2009
that was good i like ot it was different and i like where jake turned her
jcgjg chapter 22 . 8/1/2009
For me, this story went from GOOD to GREAT from chapter 12 right on through to 22. I loved what you did with Bella's character. Bella's powers were fascinating and the idea of her turning into a wolf, as opposed to a vampire, was novel to me despite my having read a lot of fanfiction. You did a really wonderful job with this story!
jcgjg chapter 23 . 8/1/2009
Even if this version had not contained a blooper, in my opinion, the rewrite is awesome and is my preferred version. Great job!
Hanna chapter 22 . 7/13/2009
I liked this story because it had a very original plot and you used new things. Thanks :D you are a very talnented writer!
meggiea101 chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
Tamza chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
im confused i know i should read on to find this out lol

is this a Edward/Victoria pairing?
Taeniaea chapter 23 . 6/11/2008
Great Story!
Vampirate Princess chapter 10 . 4/13/2008
*Story* not account lol. you dont have to write it you know ;) You can just end up with 2 finished stories and not leave that one..


out there...

ya know?
Vampirate Princess chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
Wow... so if you are leaving why dont you just delete your account? Cause i dont think that one story is finished...

I'm just saying... if you dont like fanfiction thats fine!

I would just get rid of it all together know?
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