Reviews for Promises
RyanThorpe chapter 1 . 1/21
*cries* that was devastatingly, heartbreakingly, beautiful. I was literally bawling my eyes out by the time I got to the end.

The visuals, "It only spoke volumes of the event that was sneaking nearer and nearer by the slow, agonising seconds. Darkness. Hollowness.", of the process of Tessa dying was devastating as well as beautifully described. I felt *every* single one of Steve's tears cutting deep into my soul.

You have written this so well!

Love it so much!
Ahmose chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
Hi Neela!

What a wonderful story... But so sad. Until the end, I hoped that ambulance would come in time...

I think that what you write is exactly how Steve it is. To my mind, all what you said, in the way you said, is the reason why he is that man, and not another.

I saw you wrote another story, and I'm going to read it!

Ahmose