Reviews for Awakening
YuugiYY chapter 7 . 5/27/2013
There MUST be more! Isn't there?
ramupop chapter 7 . 4/24/2013
Great fic!.any updates?
PoeticLover1996 chapter 7 . 12/21/2012
I love your story! I hope you update soon :)
PhAnToM 1212 chapter 7 . 9/1/2012
I love the story :D
Please update soon!
PleiadesWolfe chapter 7 . 4/10/2012
I can't see the retrieval of Gohan being easy. Even if they do get Gohan away, I think Vegeta might go after him. I don't want to see him with Carlene. I hope she gets her just desserts by the end.
PhoenixLord05 chapter 7 . 3/14/2012
I really would like it be so that Gohan falls in love with Vegeta, Vegeta commits suicide because he feels guilty and Gohan soon follows and Burdock and the King get together and have children together. ' and " are missing? Where oh where! I don't really care as long as Gohan and Vegeta get together I'm fine with the story. I loved your story "Triangle Of Kisses" and would love a prequel for it! Please!
Pinecallado chapter 7 . 9/26/2011
Uggghh! Please update this story soon!
Jumpshot25 chapter 5 . 9/15/2011
egeta f***ing sucks! I want him to DIE! How old is Vegeta? What the hell happened from dbz? Update soon. I'll read the other chapters.
Safiiri chapter 7 . 8/12/2011
Good story you have here, I hope you get a chance to finish it one day, would love to know what happens :)
Miko Vampire chapter 7 . 3/27/2011
I can't wait too see the look on everyones faces most of all that Skank trying to get Vegeta when it's found out that Gohan is preggers with Vegeta's baby, then Vegeta can have Gohan and tell that Biatch to pack her bags and never come back!

PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
Darklildrako chapter 7 . 2/14/2011
Hey, this story was hot. When's the next chapter?
Neflie14 chapter 7 . 2/2/2011
Ok so it seems you update three times a year. Good. LOL that means another chapter might be coming out soon *crosses fingers*

I'm not one to beg...but I might hahaha.

I have a sneaking suspicion that bitch is going to team up with someone and there's gonna be a hit out on our poor little Gohan.

But in the cave scene you totally should make Vegeta sitting there contemplating on whether or not he should take Gohan. Struggling with his conscience and feelings so to speak. Driving him a little crazy. Then something along the lines of Gohan waking up, him and Vegeta have a little "heart to heart" and genuine feelings of "love" develop(throws up a little) lol

Oh and then somewhere along the line Vegeta gives Gohan a permanent mark.

Just a suggestion hahaha.
petites sorcieres chapter 7 . 1/20/2011
OW! I really love your story One of the ew where Gohan actually APPEAR as a fighter, even if there is that Vegeta/Gohan relationship...So I hope we will see him more as a fighter too(for example SS2 )...I was wondering...Namek happened...Then how come Vegeta nor Gohan remembered ? Did the Cell games happen too ? Is Goten born ? It doesn't seem like so..

Oh. Dear. Spooner, Al and Videl car going to be KILLED. T_T I see lots of scolding...Beating ? ...For them -_-'

I really like the idea of putting Videl here, as Gohan close friend AND as a half breed...I don't like Gohan/Videl, but this ...this is GREAT

I laughed SO MUCH when I saw the three of them looking for Gohan, Al putting his clothes on camera xD and then...Almost naked in front of the other Saiyans when they saw him xDDD

Don't know if you've read Harry potter or not, but Videl reminded me of Hermione in book 1, the two others of Harry and Ron (about how she should sort her priority etc, the hostility between them at the beginning) especially when they were looking for Gohan xDDD

And Al/Videl made me think of Ron/Hermione SO MUCH XD

Anyway, I love them...And their friendship...And how loyal they are to Gohan.

CONTINUE :DDD
randomactionnoises chapter 7 . 1/3/2011
I love the story! Please update soon!
DL chapter 7 . 12/19/2010
Yea!

Great story

I can't wait to read more.
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