|Reviews for The Outcast|
| Rummi chapter 1 . 7/6/2001
This is brilliant. Really gripping, believable, original. Looking forward to the next part!
| Tears chapter 1 . 7/6/2001
...whoa... this is good...as always... pleeez come out wit the new chapter soon!
| Miss-Madison chapter 1 . 7/6/2001
| meh chapter 1 . 7/6/2001
very good so far. continue! oh, and abou the japanese society thing, read Lord Archive's fic Izumi Asks. it should help
| Whitney chapter 1 . 7/6/2001
this story rules!...i love it!...poor Kari...she has to wear that ugly uniform...woops...anyway very good...
| mariel4000 chapter 1 . 7/6/2001
HEY! I know what would make this story better T.K.! This story was kool ya' gotta' write more and make it TAKARI! Please?
| Angel Of Light chapter 1 . 7/6/2001
That was really great! I can not wait to read the rest.
| LillSakura chapter 1 . 7/6/2001
It was a really good start plz continue!
| ShannonL chapter 1 . 7/5/2001
Lovely Silver, simply lovely. I like how you portrayed the friendship between Davis and Kari and the Dark Ocean bits were marvelous. I can't wait to see where this leads.
| TripleC Squared chapter 1 . 7/5/2001
Good start...Keep it up Sliver!
| Grimlock chapter 1 . 7/5/2001
This looks promising so far. I'll keep my eyes on it. (and your other one, whatever it's about)
| Phantom 1 chapter 1 . 7/5/2001
Darkness Reborn? I don't think I read that. But something tells me this will be much more itnense than your other stories. I'm very interested in finding out what happens to Kari. Although I could probably guess from the title.
| Graveflower chapter 1 . 7/5/2001
Cool... this fic sounds like it has a ton of possibilities! Great job, looking forward to seeing more!