Reviews for The Outcast
One Lucky Unicorn chapter 12 . 3/18/2008
This is an impressive piece of work - you've got definate talent. I love how you further developed the characters while keeping them true to their roots at the same time. You also handled the subject of religion wonderfully and maturely and tackled dropped plot-points from the show itself masterfully. The ending was rather sad, but ultimately hopeful.

I honestly don't have any criticism at all, except that I noticed a few mispelled or missing words here and there, but nothing was ever bad enough to detract from the story.

Bravo, sir!
Mayur Urva chapter 12 . 12/8/2007
The story was awesome! I hope you make a sequel! My only complain was there wasn't enough fighting scenes in the story. Otherwise, its a 10/10 story!
chiyuu-kun chapter 12 . 10/20/2007
I've got just one question for ya ...

When's the sequel?

That was awesome! Probably one of the greatest Daikari stories ever read. I'll be happier than a dog rolling in mud if you come up with the sequel!
RagingDragon04 chapter 11 . 8/18/2007
Awesome story... sad at the end... but its usually what good animes end up with.

I admire how you wrote this fic... and I hope, even though its been more than 4 years you can write a sequel to this fantastic masterpiece you wrote.

What if you call it 'When dreams collide' or 'The Outcast Vol. 2'

I would be happy as a dog who gets a bone if you make a sequel to this story...

Good luck with your other fics...

You probably lost inspiration to write in digimon becuase you shunned your love for DaiKari and focused on a pairing you dont like, like Takari.

Anyway... Good luck with your Zoids fic...

I loved your story so much that I'll probably start my own story! even though I have fics to finish! Thanks a lot dude... this pairing was something that symbolized a lot for me...

Thanks to you I'll try and make my when Im writing.

Your friend, #1 Daikari fan (Everyone glares at me),

RagingDragon04

PS: Sorry for reposting... its just that I forgot to add you to my fav authors list.

And your story to my alert and fav list.

Laters!
RagingDragon04 chapter 12 . 8/18/2007
Awesome story... sad at the end... but its usually what good animes end up with.

I admire how you wrote this fic... and I hope, even though its been more than 4 years you can write a sequel to this fantastic masterpiece you wrote.

What if you call it 'When dreams collide' or 'The Outcast Vol. 2'

I would be happy as a dog who gets a bone if you make a sequel to this story...

Good luck with your other fics...

You probably lost inspiration to write in digimon becuase you shunned your love for DaiKari and focused on a pairing you dont like, like Takari.

Anyway... Good luck with your Zoids fic...

I loved your story so much that I'll probably start my own story! even though I have fics to finish! Thanks a lot dude... this pairing was something that symbolized a lot for me...

Thanks to you I'll try and make my when Im writing.

Your friend, #1 Daikari fan (Everyone glares at me),

RagingDragon04
RagingDragon04 chapter 2 . 8/17/2007
Son of a... how dare that guy try and hurt Kari... argg... (brings out bigger knife) I'll get you for what you tried to do!

Awesome story so far dude... I like it a lot.

I see that you havent updated since... well 3 or 4 years... so... if you have time I would like to see the final to this story... it doesnt have to be something big...

I dont care if its too lame... just finish it please.

Please Reply... dont ignore me please.

I really liked this story... Thanks for your time.

Its a real shame that you lost your love for Digimon...

Well Awesome job dude... you should be proud of what you wrote.

Answer me when you have time... Laters.
ambriam chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
I'm not much for writing long reviews but I have to say, I like what you did with the digimon specially davis to many people bash him. So please keep writing I look foward to reading more of your stories.
dynasty black chapter 12 . 3/8/2007
this is a nice story. i wonder if you'll make a sequel to it.
dark-kilala chapter 7 . 8/6/2006
This storys awesome!
Matt and T.K chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
please tell me this is takari...-Matt
Guest chapter 1 . 11/3/2005
Heh, one line that I'd ALWAYS like to hear:

BlackGatomon...Warp Digivole to...Lilithmon!
Inkbug chapter 12 . 10/11/2005
Wow. That's really all I can say to describe this fic fully. This truly is an incredible piece of work. It was on of the first major fics I read here of that helped me gather up the courage to write my own story, since I'd always been afraid of what other people would think of my writing. But yet, when I see works like this it really inspires me to write my own ideas down.

I know you've said you are lacking insperation for Digimon Fanfics but I really would like a sequal to this. I'm sure that there are many, many other people out here that aggree with me.

If you're looking for insperation, one of the things thats helped me is listining to music as I write. You never know what sort of ideas you'll recive listning to the raido _ But, I sincerily hope a sequal will be comming out soon _

Ja Ne 'Till then

Broken Starlight
Kyuubi-Tenshi chapter 12 . 9/24/2005
Too lazy to sign in...P I read this a long time ago...But couldn't be bothered reviewing. Anyway, I don't think the sotry should end like that! Sequel please?
X Prodigy chapter 7 . 9/18/2005
Excellent! i always wanted Veemon and Gatomon to get together as well as Kari and Davis you don't get much of those i'ts those TK and Kari ones i hate! Anyway keep on writing
DayDreamer9 chapter 12 . 8/23/2005
WOW! THIS WAS FAB! I thought Muri's Mom's outburst was uncalled for, but I REALLY hope you write a happy sequel for this! I'LL BE WAITING! _
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