Reviews for The Hunt For The Compass
Karen072290 chapter 15 . 11/6/2009
hmm...Mick wanting to join the crew? It seems he likes Elizabeth too!.. & Carmen she keeps getting more mysterious! cant wait till your next chapter! please update when you can!
Karen072290 chapter 14 . 11/6/2009
yay Elizabeth is free! gotta luv carmens awsome useful witchcraft! she's an intriguing character :)
Karen072290 chapter 13 . 11/6/2009
ooh elizabeth! that temptress! nice one! she's definately got style in distractions :) lol Norrington never knew what hit him! luvv it!
Karen072290 chapter 12 . 11/6/2009
pintel & regetti! luv them :) ah the kraken! pintel no Carmen she knew all along, luv this chapter..
Karen072290 chapter 11 . 11/6/2009
hm.. the all seem to be taken by carmen! :) hmm is Jack getting a little jealous? :) cant wait to click the next chapter!
Karen072290 chapter 10 . 11/6/2009
aw Jack! what a gentleman! :) lol Mick for sitting hehe.

"Come on and sit, luv", Jack said and Mick sat himself down – Jack just stared at him:

"I meant HER, but ye're welcome too I guess"

Carmen couldn't help but giggle a little bit as she walked in front of the chair which Jack had pulled out for her. Carefully he shoved the chair under her and she sat herself down

luv it!
Karen072290 chapter 9 . 11/6/2009
"Now, boys… let's get down to business", Carmen said and smacked Jack's shoulder as she discovered how he was looking down at his belt buckle.

"Not THAT kind of business, idiot"

perfect! & of course Carmen in that dress! Jack couldnt keep his.. mind.. & eyes off of her! :) & neither could mick! luvv it!
Karen072290 chapter 8 . 11/5/2009
oh! Carmen 's Got attitude! :)

"Going to a funeral?", Mick snorted and approached her slowly – he didn't quite know what side she was on, and he wouldn't risk having a another weapon stuck in his face. She looked up at him, her green eyes sparkling:

"No. Unless you don't shut up", she said firmly and helped Jack sit up:

i love Kristen's attitude too w/ Jack, lol

"Me head…", a voice suddenly came from behind. And then a female voice:

"You only need two stitches, don't be a wuss"

Mick turned around to see a red haired woman kneeling over Jack, studying the deep cut in his dreadlocked scalp.

thanks for making Mick, he's an interesting character too :)
Karen072290 chapter 7 . 11/5/2009
Lol Jack! kuvv this moment :) "What's so funny?", he asked as he waved the broken bottle in the air. Mick bit his lower lip:

"You look funny", Mick just said.

"Well, you… have red hair…!", Jack spat back, but stopped dead in his tracks when he discovered how stupid that had sounded. Stating the obvious

& i love the sand too :) nice move Jack!
Karen072290 chapter 6 . 11/5/2009
typical Jack,lol .. Smack! love it! hmm.. bar fight! awsome chapter :)
Karen072290 chapter 5 . 11/5/2009
hmm.. the dirt or the compass? "the d.." lolol. ahh the Kraken! action packed awsomness :)
Karen072290 chapter 4 . 11/5/2009
lol, first talking about punishment.. & gibs asking what to do next & all Jack can do is space out and think of rum!.. and his Jar of Dirt!.. getting annoyed at gibbs when he interrupts his thoughts! awsome lovve it!
Karen072290 chapter 3 . 11/5/2009
another awsome chapter :) Mick turning captain Jacks words on him lol. one of my favorite parts! {"Wanna know something about the compass?", the Viking merely said.

Jack raised an eyebrow and looked around for a couple of seconds as

if he had only just discovered where he was.

"I can't have it…?", Jack asked and looked at Mick with a lifted

index finger as if he was stating a fact. Mick cocked his head:

"Bravo! You win a jar of dirt, tada!", }

I love Captain Jacks reply too! nobody makes fun of his jar of dirt like that lol!

{Jack suddenly looked almost hurt:

"Don't mock my jar of dirt", he just said as he slowly raised his

sword towards Mick.

"Savvy?", he added just in case this Scandinavian was thick-headed. }
Karen072290 chapter 2 . 11/5/2009
lol.. Jack's thing! love this chapter! well written & funny chapter! lol. Mick being caught & saying the first thing that came to him! perfect moment!

{..Umm… I was just admiring… your… thing…", Mick rasped and looked at

Sparrow whose eyes squinted as he stared down at his own crotch:

"My… thing?", he asked, still not fully awake.

"Not THAT thing, geez!", Mick burst out and nodded at the compass.}

{..."Oh… my thing… Many people are interested in my thing… That came out

wrong", }

oh Jack! He's so cute when he's drunk & half awake! luvv it!
Karen072290 chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
luvv this chapter :) hehe wetness & leather.. lol Captain Jack Sparrow! i love this part {"By the way….!", Jack's voice boomed as he came around the corner –

"Oh… that's… admirable…", he said and pointed towards Mick's lower

region as he intensely focused on the ceiling and drank some more

rum. He had never seen that size before.

"Gotta be a viking thing…", Jack mumbled to himself as Mick covered

his noble parts with the bundle of clothes.

happy friday! favorited & suscribed, checking every box!
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