Reviews for Yajuu no Kinkou
TheEmeraldArcher chapter 5 . 9/7/2014
Still here, looking good. More details and watch your grammar please
TheEmeraldArcher chapter 4 . 9/7/2014
Thats a pretty decent story youve got here. I know its too late but you should really work on your grammar and maybe "showing" instead of "telling" whats going on in certain scene, those things would really help. Good job though!
Ranmaleopard chapter 10 . 7/11/2013
How come naruto doesnt get a fox morph? Will naruto get to keep any Dino morphs he acquires (I'm hoping he'll go for velociraptor, allosaurus, mosasaur, megalodon, and maybe quezetlcoatl) Also why doesn't he use shadow clones to get various DNA of other animals as well as use them to train in animal form?
Please pm me on what u think
kurifu gari chapter 17 . 6/13/2013
This was a awsome cross over
Crazy as a Cheshire Cat chapter 17 . 5/15/2013
I think you should do Harry Potter and Animorphs crossover where the twins get invited to Hogwarts, but before they go, Naruto gives them the morphing ability.
Matt chapter 5 . 5/7/2013
Naruto must be really stupid if he dicided to add a person who's is to be an actress. I mean she could be working for the Yeerks and acting like she is nice and friendly.
Matt chapter 2 . 5/7/2013
Wow! This is horrible. I mean if I were you I'd want Naruto to meet the Animorphs.
Blaise Ryusa chapter 17 . 3/14/2013
Okay first off, I love the story. It has a decent plot even if it skips quite a bit and there are also some bits that you could have elaborated more on. However your grammar was terrible. Seriously just type it up in ms word first and then copy and paste, it doesn't get all the mistakes but it will get most of them. Also don't just say that naruto explained how chakra affects morphing, actually explain it. It doesn't have to be a real explanation, this is fanfiction make something up. Other than those to things though this is a really good story that I would recommend to my friends.
Ciruno chapter 17 . 11/27/2011

It was a great read. I will miss this fic, goodbye old chum
Ciruno chapter 16 . 11/27/2011
I like this ending way more than the original. Animorphs win, yeerks lose, no more evil yeerk, Epic end
Ciruno chapter 15 . 11/27/2011
Poor Naruto, sperm milking... Hehe

Now I'm interested in Predator. If you're still alive, might you answer this question? (Is it a good movie?)

At least Naruto is training his child!
Ciruno chapter 14 . 11/27/2011
And Sai is introduced. Weird fellow isn't he?
Ciruno chapter 13 . 11/27/2011
Elfangor's last memories were depressing and tear jerker. At least Naruto defeated Arbat the andalite jerk!
Ciruno chapter 12 . 11/27/2011
I like crossovers and I am willing to review every chapter of this thing to prove how great this is
Ciruno chapter 11 . 11/27/2011
Have anyone ever mentioned what great author you have? You might want to change some mistakes like punctuation or spelling though.
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