Reviews for Tread Softly
Dasgun chapter 1 . 12/14/2022
Guest chapter 1 . 5/4/2018
Awe too cute! Thank tou
Pandora Imperatrix chapter 1 . 3/29/2016
This was very cute.
Christopher is ridiculous Goddess bless him :D
Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2015
Haha adorable!
Gabriel chapter 1 . 8/29/2014
Pretty fun. You really captured Christopher's demeanor, and might have even taken it a step further. I especially love that last line, the way you have to say EVERYTHING twice before Christopher notices. And I do wonder how Gabriel de Witt didn't catch on to Christopher's terrible misuse of magic bringing all that stuff over from other series, but then Christopher seems pretty skilled at fooling the old man, so it may be just that. I loved how you added Conrad into the story and Christopher's "suddenly sober lordly scowl" was awesome.

If you allow me to leave a suggestion, I do think you should have started your story with that second section. This line: "In the cupboard of her bedside table at school, Millie had built up a small collection of bizarre goods" is a great first line for a story.
taoT chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
Just wanted to say that this is one of the few fanfics I keep coming back to read. One line is especially striking: "His dark head moved from side to side with all the inarticulate pride of a purebred racehorse and Millie recognised that that was all he could say. She either understood or she didn't." Really loved this sweet and anxious love story, and hope you keep writing!
kagebito chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
completely delightful :) thank you.
everydreamforthefuture chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
This is fantastic, I especially like the ending and having to say things twice to Christopher! Wish you had some more Chrestomanci fanfic - this one is funny and quirky enough to be just right!
A.Pevensie chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
This is really lovely :) I love Christopher and Millie (each individually, and as a pair) and you've gotten all three of those aspects pitch perfect. And there aren't nearly enough DWJ fics, so it's a pleasure to read one that's both new and excellent!
roslintower chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Delicately written. Very well handled, with a rather apt title.
Garagina chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
amazing! I loved it!
DragonGrin - former TeenTypist chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
That was absolutely adorable. I can just imagine Christopher trying to navigate his way through first love.
gote chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
The characterisations in this are perfect! I absolutely love Christopher especially. My favourite part was the start, with the shells. Really well done overall. :)
kittyblossom chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
how perfectly exquisite. i do adore conrad's small role, there's such a gap in canon of those six years that he was there at the castle.
That Vintage Dress chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
A lovely little story; I think you did the original justice. :) The tone of it was perfect.
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