|Reviews for Daylight|
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/19
Okay, so this story is downright ADORABLE. I LOVE it. But I just wanted to point out that the style in the early 1900s was not in fact low-cut to show off cleavage, but high cut. You say several times "the wind on her back and neck" when I fact the wind would be covered by a thick layer of fabric.
| PhantomWhispers chapter 4 . 12/26/2012
Splendid ending to a wonderfully sweet story.
I loved this story very much. This is a sure favorite! Fantastic job!
| PhantomWhispers chapter 3 . 12/26/2012
Yippee! You introduce to me a character to hate! So many I already have...
But honestly, I enjoyed this chapter.
| PhantomWhispers chapter 2 . 12/26/2012
Marvelous descriptions. Your use of adjectives is perfect.
| PhantomWhispers chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Very nice first chapter. It was subtle; I like that very much.
I will continu reading this to my interest. :)
| Rosa Cotton chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
Beautiful! You wrote Mary and Dickon perfectly.
| CYLi chapter 4 . 5/1/2012
Yaaaaa this is sooo cute! I found mmysefl tearing up at the same time Mary did haha. And when Dickon confessed his love...oh~ I died and went to fanfic heaven.
| fire dragonheart chapter 4 . 8/19/2011
| ride2night chapter 4 . 7/3/2011
Dickon Mary blissful love. Well done!
| Sojourner chapter 4 . 6/28/2011
That was absolutely lovely. Very well written. Absolute perfection.
| LilyGraceVirtue chapter 4 . 3/28/2011
This was very lovely!:D
Thanks for sharing and please write more!
| fantasylover4evr chapter 4 . 11/11/2010
i love it! this was amazing! :D
| Anne Gable chapter 4 . 8/9/2010
Yes! This is it! I finally found it! You can not imagine how long I've been looking for this story. I read it ages ago, before I had an account on here, and then I couldn't even remember the website, let alone the name of the story! Needless to say after all that, I think your story is just about perfect: tone, characterization, plot, everything. Thank you so much for sharing, and this is going straight on my favorites list.
| some kind of harmony chapter 2 . 3/10/2010
"At first she assumed she was getting choked up as well, but then she realized that it was mainly just the tightness of the corset."
Haha, I love this! Such a subtle send-up of the fashion of the time. : P
| macawtopia chapter 4 . 1/26/2010
That was very sweet! Everyone was in character, and well described ]