Reviews for Deceptive Angels |
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![]() ![]() ![]() YES! GO YAOI! I shall be looking for more chapters on this story , very good |
![]() ![]() ![]() So the boys FINALLY noticed that they Time traveled. Isn't it Nihppon? I'm sure it used to be what Japan was called. This is Vampier's have been spending time in Diasuke's house, then whe does everything look undisterbed & what happened to his family and with them gone who has been maintaining the seals on the Art, and why didn't Krad & dark give fresh feathers, and why tell the priest & nune that they were going to be casting spells (since traditionally Clerge are against that sort of thing)? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Funny how the boys didn't pick up on the fact that they are in athe future or alternate world, what with that talk of "a country oONCE known as Japan" and "once the Tokyo district". Its also odd that no one has asked where the boys are from or where their families can be found/contacted. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shouldn't this story be in Crossovers? The story started out in Rome so how could they be transported there? Considering their natures, shouldn't they be trying to look for the "ART" that brought them there so they can seal it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whens the next update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooohh, this is great. Please continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i dont get why the two framed feathers had no dust but other than that excellent and hope for an update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again very good |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved that story it was freakin awesome and that doesnt happen alot. in fact i hardly found any grammer mistakes so well done and keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice and interesting I have never seen another DN Angel/ Trinity blood before it was nice! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ohh this is very interesting |
![]() ![]() I was never one for crossover fics... but, seriously, this is really good! I hope the next chapter is put up soon. _ I'd love to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! that's so sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! I like Esther! I also love your story! It's so different! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lmao I love WIZ! |