|Reviews for Eyes of a Goddess|
| Brook Weed chapter 2 . 3/6/2009
Sorry to tell you this, but this fanfic of yours has a Mary Sue. Everyone is OOC. Idun is too perfect and has the oh-so-perfect personality. It's stated that she is in a human body, then she's a goddess, then she's human, then she can suddenly read minds. Plus, she creates miracles in ten minutes! Suddenly, Chaos and Fenris are ignored, and speak out of character. And I don't see how the position when Idun fell on Loki would have been possible, since people don't wrap their legs around objects when they fall.
I should also mention, your spelling of "Midgard" is wrong. It would be better to use a word program to check your grammar and spelling.
| SageEmpress chapter 2 . 7/3/2008