|Reviews for A Wolven Tale|
| puppy951 chapter 3 . 2/7/2010
I love it so far. It seems like it will lead to something great in the end.
| WildDayDreamer chapter 3 . 11/18/2007
Jonny here. :P
Your introduction is a good one and it deserves the title of attention grabber. The characters are interesting and you set up the story nicely. OH SUSPENSE AT THE END.
BUT your stories are a little short, and you might need to add some background information, so noone gets confused.
For example like me. I'm retarded and I get lost easily. XP der duh der.
But otherwise, I think you got something here, so keep it up.
Plz continue cause I think you created a wonderful world.
(gives you a thumbs up)
And Jonny is out
| Victorious Loser and Ermiene chapter 3 . 5/10/2007
I like how suspenseful this is so far. It seems exciting. You don't have any real issues with spelling or grammar. The only thing is, with language that foul I'd think you'd up the rating, maybe. Also, I'm rather confused about the characters. Does Riptone bear a grudge against Jarvak's pack or something?
| BlindSeer220 chapter 3 . 4/25/2007
This is a good story, besides the cussing. That bothers me.
I like Ronan already!
| HotWolfGirl chapter 3 . 3/27/2007
awesome story so far! cant wait to c wat u write next! but a hint... maybe make the chapters longer?