|Reviews for The House of Hell|
| Goth1cPr1nc3ss chapter 23 . 8/22/2009
Hey! I really think your story is completely awesome! I absolutely love it!
I also love how you are portraying Draco and Hermione's relationship, it's going slow, but it's a good slow, sometimes I read stories that have slow relationships and they jusr annoy me, but it isn't like that with yours. Your story has a bit of everything in it too. Blaise is hilarious, Theodore I find a bit confusing, because he seems like a confusing boy, and Pansy seems different, but in a good way. And I am really curious to know who Ron has been texting all the time on the roadtrip. I've been going through my list of people in Harry Potter, but I can't think of too many people that would seem right, so I'm thinking that it's going to be an original character. Don't tell me if I'm right though, I want to find out myself!
Congrats on making such an amazing story! It has to be one of my favourites!
| panneler-san chapter 23 . 8/20/2009
Wow, you've got some talent.
| Precious Ink chapter 23 . 8/19/2009
I absolutely loved this chapter! Ooh! I'm sensing sparks here... and may I just say that Blaise is utterly genius... I love him and Theodore too. They just add so much to the flow of the storyline and Draco... Draco...Draco. When will he just get over himself and turn his charm full-on for Hermione? ;P
Update soon or I'll be on your tail... ;D lol
HUGS! x the number of the times the alphabet has been recited... ;P
Geegee a.k.a. Precious Ink
| ajax.the.axe.murderess chapter 23 . 8/18/2009
i dont mean to be critical, but because it's been so long between updates, i started this chapter with little enthusiasm left in me for this story...
however, once again a great chapter, and a great story... so ive once again regained much of my interest in this story (and i really cant criticize u- im not the most consistent or fast updater, either...)
i absolutely love blaise as a character- on one level, he contrasts very nicely with draco (their so different- from their personalities, to their hair/skin color, to their sexual preferences...) but i also think they can be very similar (maybe the slytherin in them...) anyway, they're both great characters! im still a tiny bit confused by theodore, but hes growing on me...
i particularly liked how you wrote the race- it provided insight into what motivates each of the characters, which i thought helped me understand them all better (particularly theodore).
and i like how you're developing hermione and dracos relationship.
being a feminist, it kind of bugged me that hermione was the one who sat out... i like to see strong, motivated female characters (she just came across a bit weak in this chapter, for me, with the fear of water and all...) but still, a good scene...
anyway, that was a ridiculously long review. this is one of my favorite all-time stories (for originality, great characters and great writing)... so keep it up! ]
| frozengrapesareyummy chapter 5 . 8/18/2009
lol, isn't it kinda .. you know, illegal to randomly capture 6 kids and force them to live together? i mean, if you're going to go for all bad, might as well be a death eater... XD
| ShadowDog34 chapter 23 . 8/18/2009
aw they are getting closer! i cant wait to read more
| obsessivepottercullendisorder chapter 23 . 8/17/2009
OMG you HAVE to update this and quick...or i may as well die...btw best dramione story so far :D keep updating or i'll sue ;)
| YeahYouWannaKnowMyName chapter 23 . 8/17/2009
As Always, I Loved It ANd Cannot Wait For More. TeeHee. I Liked Brody's Question.
| voldyismyfather chapter 23 . 8/17/2009
i love it :)
| burnin4Christ chapter 23 . 8/17/2009
yeah i;d be interested in reading a chapter(or part of one) in draco's POV. Happy early Birthday!
| Mouchi-Mou chapter 23 . 8/17/2009
And keep writing please. ( I wont put in something threatingover here as i'm sure you have enough threats form anxious readers. )
| Ame-chan94 chapter 23 . 8/17/2009
HAPPY BIRTHDAY! This chapter took awhile :( But I loved it! And of course, you are very VERY funny. I LOVE the bits about Blaise :) One thing that made it slightly less perfect was the distance of the triathlons. I thought it was a bit strange because 1km biking and running is REALLY quite short, so I searched up 'triathlons' on google, and the distances are MUCH longer than that. Bike riding minimum was 5 km, but the average is somewhere 60-80km? O_O Running averages at about 10km. Sorry to be such a pain, but for someone as unfit as me, I was made to run 12 kilometres last year and 1km isn't really believable, to me at least. Very sorry about all this...PICKYness, but I'm just a very annoying person P
Anyway, hope you have a really REALLY awesome birthday and I hope this didn't ruin your mood or anything (I'm SO sorry if it did!)
Can't wait for the next chapter :D:D:D:D:D
| flamingbunnies chapter 23 . 8/16/2009
I kept getting distracted while reading this it was so funny cuz I ended up with a head ache from it lol. I lovedthis chapter and I wonder who's going home from Pansy's group?
| Lightest'Ink chapter 23 . 8/16/2009
XD Great chapter! Please update soon! :)
| OhSoTalented09 chapter 23 . 8/16/2009
I really like this story. Write more soon! And...