I enjoyed your story. I liked it.

Loved it. I loved Joanna a lot. She sounds really cuite. Thank you for having them get hurt a lot. I don't know why but I love it when the main charators get hurt. It was a really cuite story. I really recommend this story to people who also like people getting hurt and if you like kids.

I liked the story, it was a great idea. I just felt Joanna was older than you said she was, her speech was too adultlike. but i really enjoyed the different outlook to the episodes we'd seen.

It's one of the best stories i ever read. It was long time ago at the VA archiove but i still love it and read not only once 'cause it 's great story and i love it :)