Reviews for May's Awesomely Youthful Expedition
Ace Grey chapter 2 . 7/21/2010
"Don't hate because her milkshake brings all the boys to the yard!" defended Kelly.

"She can teach you," Erica added, "but she'll have to charge!"

Priceless XD

Good chapter none the less.
Ace Grey chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
I'll try to review every chapter. Only read Prologue so far but it was so hilarious.
Sparkly Emerald chapter 3 . 3/12/2009
This is pretty funny.
Damned Lolita chapter 2 . 12/14/2007
Yay, random Mystery parody! Not much of a review, but wev. Funny, so who cares?
Pure-Rose-Kunoichi chapter 9 . 7/8/2007
O.O Drunk groudon? whi knew? Oh and in case u didn't know Medicham of team meanies is a girl...
Pure-Rose-Kunoichi chapter 4 . 5/24/2007
i think im ganna throw up...i got the suspision that Drew is gardeivoir, not fun i doubt drew will sacrfice himself for Harley...
Raykura-Kura chapter 11 . 4/9/2007
Good epilogue. It was funny, by the way, you know that joke in the last chapter that ended with Metapod saying the last line, & you in brackets asking if you really had to say it?

Well, you do, because I don't know what Metapod said!

Oh and... *Transforms into Giratina, attacks Dawn/Hikari with Dragonbreath, then opens a portal to the Pokemon World & brings back May, thus allowing her to continue living with her family instead!*

Cem-chan chapter 11 . 4/9/2007
You know with all the 'special features' your making it sound like this was a movie and your releasing a DVD. That sounds pretty cool. Dawn is so evil, but she is the pretiest out of the 3 girls. I can't wait for DP and another fanfic from you.

do you think you could read one of my fics and leave a review. u dont have too but please.
Raykura-Kura chapter 10 . 4/8/2007
Cool. Yeah, sorry if I haven't been reviewing recently. Computer problems.

These chapters were great, personally, I'm kinda hoping for more 4Kids bashing. There name describes them perfectly:

4 Kids.
Dramatic Melody chapter 9 . 4/3/2007
nice it's a very exciting chapter!
Raykura-Kura chapter 8 . 3/31/2007
Haha. Poor Nidorino/Pinata. Although 4Kids are the ones who should be sued.

They have ruined many things! Thankfully, not this story.
Cem-chan chapter 7 . 3/30/2007
This is a good story. When Moltres aka Yuma said that the Birds are top coordinaters I thought Articuno would be (aka guy with Milotic) or Solidad (and that reminds me what kind of a name is Solidad?)

If you could read my fics and review them that would mean a lot to me so could you do it please?
Ri2 chapter 8 . 3/30/2007
Who's the Octillery?

Norman's such a pimp.

Shiftry's scary.

Caterpie...ew. Just ew.

Gundam? I'm confused.

I liked Monster Rancher, too.

Hooray for the newspaper!

Stupid Groudon!

Stupid Monkeys. Mankeys. Yeah.

A Chestnut. A CHESTNUT?

Hey, it's those three!

I don't quite understand what Wobbuffet did.

Ri2 chapter 7 . 3/30/2007
Ah, Gardenia Town. I remember that battle. May should have lost, by all rights. Eevee got hit so many times it's ridiculous it didn't lose more points!

Um...thanks, Moltres.

And...Bulbasaur! Stupid Pokemon!

No! They're dead!

Oh, wait, never mind.

Wait. Drew is...*twitches* And...he's a vampire? This is very strange...

This is so weird. How'd he even destroy the device if it was a dream?

Ash the Absol? Huh. That's unusual.

Bwahahahaha! Mad Azurill!


Articuno's Juan? Neat.

Yay Ash!

...May's weird.

Wait, how'd those guys get here?

You idiots...May's not a guy!
Raykura-Kura chapter 7 . 3/28/2007
Nice chapter. Personally, my computer has been having trouble realizing when a story is updated, so I'm glad I was able to read this.
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